Update: I have now gone through and addressed all the RPC comments and updated the relevant XML and md accordingly.
My next step will be to actually read the document top to bottom for final review. -Ekr On Mon, Mar 3, 2025 at 8:59 AM Lynne Bartholomew < lbartholo...@staff.rfc-editor.org> wrote: > Hi, Eric. So noted. Thank you! > > RFC Editor/lb > > > On Mar 3, 2025, at 6:03 AM, Eric Rescorla <e...@rtfm.com> wrote: > > > > I have created issues corresponding to the inline RPC comments/questions > and have tagged Lynn in them so she can see progress. > > > > -Ekr > > > > > > On Wed, Feb 26, 2025 at 9:51 AM Jean Mahoney < > jmaho...@staff.rfc-editor.org> wrote: > > Eric, > > > > On 2/25/25 3:14 PM, Eric Rescorla wrote: > > > Update: > > > > > > I have backported the copy-edit changes I approve of and reverted the > > > rest in the XML, which can be found here: > > > > > > https://github.com/mlswg/mls-architecture/pull/273 < > https://github.com/ > > > mlswg/mls-architecture/pull/273> > > > > https://github.com/ekr/mls-architecture/blob/merge_rpc_comments/rfc9750- > > > draft.xml <https://github.com/ekr/mls-architecture/blob/ > > > merge_rpc_comments/rfc9750-draft.xml> > > > > > > I will next go through the RPC's substantive questions and file GitHub > > > issues for each of them so we can work through them. Is there someone > > > you would like tagged on these issues? > > > > Lynne Bartholomew will be the RFC Editor handling this document's > > AUTH48. Her GitHub username is lbartholomew-rpc. > > > > Best regards, > > Jean > > > > > > > > -Ekr > > > > > > > > > On Tue, Feb 25, 2025 at 9:46 AM Eric Rescorla <e...@rtfm.com > > > <mailto:e...@rtfm.com>> wrote: > > > > > > Per private communication with Alan: a...@duric.net > > > <mailto:a...@duric.net> > > > > > > On Tue, Feb 25, 2025 at 7:50 AM Paul Wouters < > paul.wout...@aiven.io > > > <mailto:paul.wout...@aiven.io>> wrote: > > > > > > datatracker says alan.du...@globalipsound.com > > > <mailto:alan.du...@globalipsound.com>, added to CC: > > > > > > Paul > > > > > > > > > On Tue, Feb 25, 2025 at 10:47 AM Jean Mahoney > > > <jmaho...@staff.rfc-editor.org <mailto:jmaho...@staff.rfc- > > > editor.org>> wrote: > > > > > > Hi Ekr, > > > > > > On 2/24/25 8:32 PM, Eric Rescorla wrote: > > > > > > > > > > > > On Mon, Feb 24, 2025 at 4:12 PM Jean Mahoney > > > <jmaho...@staff.rfc- > > > > editor.org <http://editor.org> > > > <mailto:jmaho...@staff.rfc-editor.org > > > <mailto:jmaho...@staff.rfc-editor.org>>> wrote: > > > > > > > > Hi Ekr, > > > > > > > > On 2/24/25 5:30 PM, Eric Rescorla wrote: > > > > > Hi folks, > > > > > > > > > > This document was prepared in markdown, so it > > > would be much more > > > > > convenient to do > > > > > the editorial phase of auth48 in markdown rather > > > than in XML, as I > > > > > understand has been > > > > > done for a number of recent documents. I > > > understand that a fair > > > > amount > > > > > of work has > > > > > already happened here, but is there a possibility > > > of getting a > > > > copy of > > > > > the markdown > > > > > with just the copy edit changes? > > > > > > > > [JM] As draft-ietf-mls-architecture is a long > > > document (41 pages PDF), > > > > it would be time consuming to port the edits into > > > markdown at this time. > > > > > > > > > > > > Indeed. I've made a repo for the XML [0]. It will take > me > > > some time to > > > > backport the changes to the .md file and provide > updated XML. > > > > > > [JM] Understood, and the RPC is aiming to accept md as a > > > submission > > > format in the future. > > > > > > Is there another address for Alan Duric? a...@wire.com > > > <mailto:a...@wire.com> bounced. > > > > > > Best regards, > > > Jean > > > > > > > > > > > > > > -Ekr > > > > > > > > > > > > [0] https://github.com/ekr/rfc9750 <https://github.com/ > > > ekr/rfc9750> <https://github.com/ekr/rfc9750 <https:// > > > github.com/ekr/rfc9750>> > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > It would be much easier to start edits in markdown > in > > > a future > > > > document. > > > > If you have another markdown file that will be > > > entering the queue soon, > > > > please let us know, and we can provide an updated > > > markdown file at the > > > > beginning of AUTH48 as part of one of our process > > > experiments. > > > > > > > > Thanks and best regards, > > > > RFC Editor/jm > > > > > > > > > > > > > > -Ekr > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > On Mon, Feb 24, 2025 at 3:16 PM <rfc-editor@rfc- > > > editor.org <mailto:rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org> > > > > <mailto:rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org <mailto:rfc- > > > edi...@rfc-editor.org>> <mailto:rfc- <mailto:rfc-> > > > <mailto:rfc- <mailto:rfc->> > > > > > edi...@rfc-editor.org <mailto:editor@rfc- > > > editor.org> <mailto:edi...@rfc-editor.org > > > <mailto:edi...@rfc-editor.org>>>> wrote: > > > > > > > > > > *****IMPORTANT***** > > > > > > > > > > Updated 2025/02/24 > > > > > > > > > > RFC Author(s): > > > > > -------------- > > > > > > > > > > Instructions for Completing AUTH48 > > > > > > > > > > Your document has now entered AUTH48. 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