On Mon, Feb 24, 2025 at 4:12 PM Jean Mahoney <jmaho...@staff.rfc-editor.org>
wrote:

> Hi Ekr,
>
> On 2/24/25 5:30 PM, Eric Rescorla wrote:
> > Hi folks,
> >
> > This document was prepared in markdown, so it would be much more
> > convenient to do
> > the editorial phase of auth48 in markdown rather than in XML, as I
> > understand has been
> > done for a number of recent documents. I understand that a fair amount
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> > the markdown
> > with just the copy edit changes?
>
> [JM] As draft-ietf-mls-architecture is a long document (41 pages PDF),
> it would be time consuming to port the edits into markdown at this time.


Indeed. I've made a repo for the XML [0]. It will take me some time to
backport the changes to the .md file and provide updated XML.

-Ekr


[0] https://github.com/ekr/rfc9750



> It would be much easier to start edits in markdown in a future document.
> If you have another markdown file that will be entering the queue soon,
> please let us know, and we can provide an updated markdown file at the
> beginning of AUTH48 as part of one of our process experiments.
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> Thanks and best regards,
> RFC Editor/jm
>
> >
> > -Ekr
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> >     RFC 9750 (draft-ietf-mls-architecture-15)
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> >     Title            : The Messaging Layer Security (MLS) Architecture
> >     Author(s)        : B. Beurdouche, E. Rescorla, E. Omara, S. Inguva,
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