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On Tue, Feb 25, 2025 at 10:47 AM Jean Mahoney <jmaho...@staff.rfc-editor.org> wrote: > Hi Ekr, > > On 2/24/25 8:32 PM, Eric Rescorla wrote: > > > > > > On Mon, Feb 24, 2025 at 4:12 PM Jean Mahoney <jmaho...@staff.rfc- > > editor.org <mailto:jmaho...@staff.rfc-editor.org>> wrote: > > > > Hi Ekr, > > > > On 2/24/25 5:30 PM, Eric Rescorla wrote: > > > Hi folks, > > > > > > This document was prepared in markdown, so it would be much more > > > convenient to do > > > the editorial phase of auth48 in markdown rather than in XML, as I > > > understand has been > > > done for a number of recent documents. I understand that a fair > > amount > > > of work has > > > already happened here, but is there a possibility of getting a > > copy of > > > the markdown > > > with just the copy edit changes? > > > > [JM] As draft-ietf-mls-architecture is a long document (41 pages > PDF), > > it would be time consuming to port the edits into markdown at this > time. > > > > > > Indeed. I've made a repo for the XML [0]. It will take me some time to > > backport the changes to the .md file and provide updated XML. > > [JM] Understood, and the RPC is aiming to accept md as a submission > format in the future. > > Is there another address for Alan Duric? a...@wire.com bounced. > > Best regards, > Jean > > > > > > -Ekr > > > > > > [0] https://github.com/ekr/rfc9750 <https://github.com/ekr/rfc9750> > > > > > > > > It would be much easier to start edits in markdown in a future > > document. > > If you have another markdown file that will be entering the queue > soon, > > please let us know, and we can provide an updated markdown file at > the > > beginning of AUTH48 as part of one of our process experiments. > > > > Thanks and best regards, > > RFC Editor/jm > > > > > > > > -Ekr > > > > > > > > > On Mon, Feb 24, 2025 at 3:16 PM <rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org > > <mailto:rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org> <mailto:rfc- <mailto:rfc-> > > > edi...@rfc-editor.org <mailto:edi...@rfc-editor.org>>> wrote: > > > > > > *****IMPORTANT***** > > > > > > Updated 2025/02/24 > > > > > > RFC Author(s): > > > -------------- > > > > > > Instructions for Completing AUTH48 > > > > > > Your document has now entered AUTH48. 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Beurdouche, E. Rescorla, E. Omara, S. > > Inguva, > > > A. Duric > > > WG Chair(s) : Nick Sullivan, Sean Turner > > > Area Director(s) : Deb Cooley, Paul Wouters > > > > > > > > > >
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