Sorry just spotted an error My address has Wilimington instead of Wilmington
Jay > On 22 Jan 2025, at 08:18, Jay Daley <j...@staff.ietf.org> wrote: > > Hi Karen > > I have reviewed everything and I am happy for this to move to publication. > > Jay > >> On 22 Jan 2025, at 07:47, Karen Moore <kmo...@staff.rfc-editor.org> wrote: >> >> Dear Jay and Sean, >> >> We do not believe we have heard from you regarding this document's readiness >> for publication. Please review the files below and let us know if any >> further updates are needed or if the document is ready for publication. >> >> The updated XML file is here: >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9712.xml >> >> The updated output files are here: >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9712.txt >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9712.pdf >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9712.html >> >> This diff file shows all changes made during AUTH48: >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9712-auth48diff.html >> >> This diff file shows all changes made to date: >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9712-diff.html >> >> For the AUTH48 status of this document, please see: >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9712 >> >> Best regards, >> RFC Editor/kc >> >> >>> On Jan 13, 2025, at 1:51 PM, Karen Moore <kmo...@staff.rfc-editor.org> >>> wrote: >>> >>> Jay, >>> >>> Our files now reflect 'bringing in additional hallway seating’ (Section >>> 4.4.2). Please review and let us know if any further changes are needed or >>> if you approve the document in its current form. >>> >>> —FILES (please refresh)— >>> >>> The updated XML file is here: >>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9712.xml >>> >>> The updated output files are here: >>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9712.txt >>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9712.pdf >>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9712.html >>> >>> This diff file shows all changes made during AUTH48: >>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9712-auth48diff.html >>> >>> This diff file shows all changes made to date: >>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9712-diff.html >>> >>> Please contact us with any further updates or with your approval of the >>> document in its current form. We will await approvals from each author >>> prior to moving forward in the publication process. >>> >>> For the AUTH48 status of this document, please see: >>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9712 >>> >>> Thank you, >>> RFC Editor/kc >>> >>> >>>> On Jan 13, 2025, at 1:40 PM, Jay Daley <j...@staff.ietf.org> wrote: >>>> >>>> >>>> >>>>> On 14 Jan 2025, at 10:32, Karen Moore <kmo...@staff.rfc-editor.org> wrote: >>>>> >>>>> Hi Jay, >>>>> >>>>> We have updated our files based on your feedback (note that "BCP 226" >>>>> will be added during the publication process). >>>> >>>> >>>> Thanks >>>> >>>>> We have an additional question. >>>>> >>>>> 1) Regarding the following text, would option A or B perhaps be better >>>>> than using ‘hiring’ or ‘renting’? >>>>> >>>>> Original: >>>>> The IASA has responded to this feedback by adopting >>>>> a new practice of hiring in hallway seating whenever >>>>> that provided by the venue is insufficient. >>>>> >>>>> Perhaps: >>>>> A) The IASA has responded to this feedback by adopting >>>>> a new practice of supplying in hallway seating whenever >>>>> that provided by the venue is insufficient. >>>>> or >>>>> >>>>> B) The IASA has responded to this feedback by adopting >>>>> a new practice of making in hallway seating available >>>>> whenever that provided by the venue is insufficient. >>>> >>>> To avoid hiring or renting, my preference is: >>>> >>>> The IASA has responded to this feedback by adopting >>>> a new practice of bringing in additional hallway seating >>>> whenever that provided by the venue is insufficient. >>>> >>>> Let me know if that works for you. >>>> >>>> Jay >>>> >>>> >>>> -- >>>> Jay Daley >>>> IETF Executive Director >>>> exec-direc...@ietf.org >>>> >>> >> > > -- > Jay Daley > IETF Executive Director > exec-direc...@ietf.org > -- Jay Daley IETF Executive Director exec-direc...@ietf.org
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