Hi Karen I have reviewed everything and I am happy for this to move to publication.
Jay > On 22 Jan 2025, at 07:47, Karen Moore <kmo...@staff.rfc-editor.org> wrote: > > Dear Jay and Sean, > > We do not believe we have heard from you regarding this document's readiness > for publication. Please review the files below and let us know if any > further updates are needed or if the document is ready for publication. > > The updated XML file is here: > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9712.xml > > The updated output files are here: > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9712.txt > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9712.pdf > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9712.html > > This diff file shows all changes made during AUTH48: > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9712-auth48diff.html > > This diff file shows all changes made to date: > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9712-diff.html > > For the AUTH48 status of this document, please see: > https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9712 > > Best regards, > RFC Editor/kc > > >> On Jan 13, 2025, at 1:51 PM, Karen Moore <kmo...@staff.rfc-editor.org> wrote: >> >> Jay, >> >> Our files now reflect 'bringing in additional hallway seating’ (Section >> 4.4.2). Please review and let us know if any further changes are needed or >> if you approve the document in its current form. >> >> —FILES (please refresh)— >> >> The updated XML file is here: >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9712.xml >> >> The updated output files are here: >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9712.txt >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9712.pdf >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9712.html >> >> This diff file shows all changes made during AUTH48: >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9712-auth48diff.html >> >> This diff file shows all changes made to date: >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9712-diff.html >> >> Please contact us with any further updates or with your approval of the >> document in its current form. We will await approvals from each author >> prior to moving forward in the publication process. >> >> For the AUTH48 status of this document, please see: >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9712 >> >> Thank you, >> RFC Editor/kc >> >> >>> On Jan 13, 2025, at 1:40 PM, Jay Daley <j...@staff.ietf.org> wrote: >>> >>> >>> >>>> On 14 Jan 2025, at 10:32, Karen Moore <kmo...@staff.rfc-editor.org> wrote: >>>> >>>> Hi Jay, >>>> >>>> We have updated our files based on your feedback (note that "BCP 226" will >>>> be added during the publication process). >>> >>> >>> Thanks >>> >>>> We have an additional question. >>>> >>>> 1) Regarding the following text, would option A or B perhaps be better >>>> than using ‘hiring’ or ‘renting’? >>>> >>>> Original: >>>> The IASA has responded to this feedback by adopting >>>> a new practice of hiring in hallway seating whenever >>>> that provided by the venue is insufficient. >>>> >>>> Perhaps: >>>> A) The IASA has responded to this feedback by adopting >>>> a new practice of supplying in hallway seating whenever >>>> that provided by the venue is insufficient. >>>> or >>>> >>>> B) The IASA has responded to this feedback by adopting >>>> a new practice of making in hallway seating available >>>> whenever that provided by the venue is insufficient. >>> >>> To avoid hiring or renting, my preference is: >>> >>> The IASA has responded to this feedback by adopting >>> a new practice of bringing in additional hallway seating >>> whenever that provided by the venue is insufficient. >>> >>> Let me know if that works for you. >>> >>> Jay >>> >>> >>> -- >>> Jay Daley >>> IETF Executive Director >>> exec-direc...@ietf.org >>> >> > -- Jay Daley IETF Executive Director exec-direc...@ietf.org
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