> On 14 Jan 2025, at 10:32, Karen Moore <kmo...@staff.rfc-editor.org> wrote: > > Hi Jay, > > We have updated our files based on your feedback (note that "BCP 226" will be > added during the publication process).
Thanks > We have an additional question. > > 1) Regarding the following text, would option A or B perhaps be better than > using ‘hiring’ or ‘renting’? > > Original: > The IASA has responded to this feedback by adopting > a new practice of hiring in hallway seating whenever > that provided by the venue is insufficient. > > Perhaps: > A) The IASA has responded to this feedback by adopting > a new practice of supplying in hallway seating whenever > that provided by the venue is insufficient. > or > > B) The IASA has responded to this feedback by adopting > a new practice of making in hallway seating available > whenever that provided by the venue is insufficient. To avoid hiring or renting, my preference is: The IASA has responded to this feedback by adopting a new practice of bringing in additional hallway seating whenever that provided by the venue is insufficient. Let me know if that works for you. Jay -- Jay Daley IETF Executive Director exec-direc...@ietf.org -- auth48archive mailing list -- auth48archive@rfc-editor.org To unsubscribe send an email to auth48archive-le...@rfc-editor.org
