I approve the document in its current form. spt
> On Jan 22, 2025, at 5:42 PM, Karen Moore <kmo...@staff.rfc-editor.org> wrote: > > Hi Sean and Jay, > > Thank you for your replies. We have updated our files accordingly. Sean, > please review and let us know if you have any further changes or if you > approve the document in its current form. > > —Files (please refresh)— > > The updated XML file is here: > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9712.xml > > The updated output files are here: > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9712.txt > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9712.pdf > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9712.html > > This diff file shows all changes made during AUTH48: > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9712-auth48diff.html > > This diff file shows all changes made to date: > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9712-diff.html > > For the AUTH48 status of this document, please see: > https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9712 > > Best regards, > RFC Editor/kc > >> On Jan 22, 2025, at 2:07 PM, Sean Turner <s...@sn3rd.com> wrote: >> >> Just one question: >> >> Could this: >> >> The choice of a main hotel and negotiation of the network for that hotel are >> more complicated >> >> be this: >> >> The choice of a main hotel and negotiation for the network at that hotel are >> more complicated >> >> spt >> >>> On Jan 21, 2025, at 2:55 PM, Karen Moore <kmo...@staff.rfc-editor.org> >>> wrote: >>> >>> Hi Jay, >>> >>> We have updated both addresses to reflect “Wilmington” and have noted your >>> approval on the AUTH48 status page >>> (https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9712). >>> >>> We now await approval from Sean prior to moving forward with publication. >>> >>> The updated XML file is here: >>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9712.xml >>> >>> The updated output files are here: >>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9712.txt >>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9712.pdf >>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9712.html >>> >>> This diff file shows all changes made during AUTH48: >>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9712-auth48diff.html >>> >>> This diff file shows all changes made to date: >>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9712-diff.html >>> >>> For the AUTH48 status of this document, please see: >>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9712 >>> >>> Best regards, >>> RFC Editor/kc >>> >>>> On Jan 21, 2025, at 11:18 AM, Jay Daley <j...@staff.ietf.org> wrote: >>>> >>>> Hi Karen >>>> >>>> I have reviewed everything and I am happy for this to move to publication. >>>> >>>> Jay >>>> >>>>> On 22 Jan 2025, at 07:47, Karen Moore <kmo...@staff.rfc-editor.org> wrote: >>>>> >>>>> Dear Jay and Sean, >>>>> >>>>> We do not believe we have heard from you regarding this document's >>>>> readiness for publication. Please review the files below and let us know >>>>> if any further updates are needed or if the document is ready for >>>>> publication. >>>>> >>>>> The updated XML file is here: >>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9712.xml >>>>> >>>>> The updated output files are here: >>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9712.txt >>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9712.pdf >>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9712.html >>>>> >>>>> This diff file shows all changes made during AUTH48: >>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9712-auth48diff.html >>>>> >>>>> This diff file shows all changes made to date: >>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9712-diff.html >>>>> >>>>> For the AUTH48 status of this document, please see: >>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9712 >>>>> >>>>> Best regards, >>>>> RFC Editor/kc >>>>> >>>>> >>>>>> On Jan 13, 2025, at 1:51 PM, Karen Moore <kmo...@staff.rfc-editor.org> >>>>>> wrote: >>>>>> >>>>>> Jay, >>>>>> >>>>>> Our files now reflect 'bringing in additional hallway seating’ (Section >>>>>> 4.4.2). Please review and let us know if any further changes are needed >>>>>> or if you approve the document in its current form. >>>>>> >>>>>> —FILES (please refresh)— >>>>>> >>>>>> The updated XML file is here: >>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9712.xml >>>>>> >>>>>> The updated output files are here: >>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9712.txt >>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9712.pdf >>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9712.html >>>>>> >>>>>> This diff file shows all changes made during AUTH48: >>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9712-auth48diff.html >>>>>> >>>>>> This diff file shows all changes made to date: >>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9712-diff.html >>>>>> >>>>>> Please contact us with any further updates or with your approval of the >>>>>> document in its current form. We will await approvals from each author >>>>>> prior to moving forward in the publication process. >>>>>> >>>>>> For the AUTH48 status of this document, please see: >>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9712 >>>>>> >>>>>> Thank you, >>>>>> RFC Editor/kc >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>>> On Jan 13, 2025, at 1:40 PM, Jay Daley <j...@staff.ietf.org> wrote: >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>>> On 14 Jan 2025, at 10:32, Karen Moore <kmo...@staff.rfc-editor.org> >>>>>>>> wrote: >>>>>>>> >>>>>>>> Hi Jay, >>>>>>>> >>>>>>>> We have updated our files based on your feedback (note that "BCP 226" >>>>>>>> will be added during the publication process). >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Thanks >>>>>>> >>>>>>>> We have an additional question. >>>>>>>> >>>>>>>> 1) Regarding the following text, would option A or B perhaps be better >>>>>>>> than using ‘hiring’ or ‘renting’? >>>>>>>> >>>>>>>> Original: >>>>>>>> The IASA has responded to this feedback by adopting >>>>>>>> a new practice of hiring in hallway seating whenever >>>>>>>> that provided by the venue is insufficient. >>>>>>>> >>>>>>>> Perhaps: >>>>>>>> A) The IASA has responded to this feedback by adopting >>>>>>>> a new practice of supplying in hallway seating whenever >>>>>>>> that provided by the venue is insufficient. >>>>>>>> or >>>>>>>> >>>>>>>> B) The IASA has responded to this feedback by adopting >>>>>>>> a new practice of making in hallway seating available >>>>>>>> whenever that provided by the venue is insufficient. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> To avoid hiring or renting, my preference is: >>>>>>> >>>>>>> The IASA has responded to this feedback by adopting >>>>>>> a new practice of bringing in additional hallway seating >>>>>>> whenever that provided by the venue is insufficient. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Let me know if that works for you. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Jay >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> -- >>>>>>> Jay Daley >>>>>>> IETF Executive Director >>>>>>> exec-direc...@ietf.org >>>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>> >>>> >>>> -- >>>> Jay Daley >>>> IETF Executive Director >>>> exec-direc...@ietf.org >>>> >>> >> > -- auth48archive mailing list -- auth48archive@rfc-editor.org To unsubscribe send an email to auth48archive-le...@rfc-editor.org
