James, I found it quite interesting, the problem you are trying to solve is easy to understand. I understood what the product does, but was just slightly confused by the two different parts of your offering: - sync for enterprise stores, sure, understand why and what you do (the long list of supported systems impressed). - display on device, markup, search, geolocation etc. sounded like you're doing things many people already have (favorite) apps fore, so that clouded (pun intended) the message a little bit for me. - I watched it until the end, wasn't too long. - The feel was startup addressing corporate needs, I think that's probably fine. You want to look new, but also have people realise you understand the enterprise market.
On Wednesday, August 15, 2012 10:35:55 AM UTC+8, James MacGregor wrote: > > Just released an explainer video for a new startup I'm working on: > http://vimeo.com/47221542 > > It's an enterprise product that I'm trying to make a little sexier and > startupy. This video is just the first step of a bunch of marketing > material to come so I'd really like to know if I'm on track. > > What I want to know is: > - Did you find it interesting or boring? > - Do you understand what the product actually does? > - Did you actually watch it to the end? (or was it too long) > - Did if feel corporate or startupy? > > Any feedback appreciated. > > -- > James MacGregor > > (mobile) +61 415996507 > (skype) jsmacgregor76 > (twitter) @jamessmacgregor <https://twitter.com/#!/jamessmacgregor> > (email) jsmacg...@gmail.com <javascript:> > -- You received this message because you are subscribed to the Silicon Beach Australia mailing list. Vist http://siliconbeachaustralia.org for more Forum rules 1) No lurkers! It is expected that you introduce yourself. 2) No jobs postings. You can use http://siliconbeachaustralia.org/jobs To post to this group, send email to silicon-beach-australia@googlegroups.com To unsubscribe from this group, send email to silicon-beach-australia+unsubscr...@googlegroups.com For more options, visit this group at http://groups.google.com/group/silicon-beach-australia?hl=en?hl=en
