Ha no probs Alwin thanks for the feedback. Going to be a while until I can compete with that salesforce production, I'm sure they don't pay in whisky :)
Will probably leave out music but will be adding sound effects shortly. On Wednesday, 15 August 2012 15:23:16 UTC+10, chinmiester wrote: > > Hah... just realised I clicked the wrong video... > > FAIL!!!! on my behalf. > > Drats Oliver, the Youtube video you posted took up half my Gmail page > (Google preferential). > Difficult to compare after seeing Do > > Sorry James... > > But I'll give my proper feedback now. > > - Did you find it interesting or boring? > It is interesting... but I think can be spruced up better. The colour > usage (pastel) felt a little bland. > > - Do you understand what the product actually does? > Yeap got it... but definitely better targeted to Risk Managers. I think > the narration with the graphic worked well. > > - Did you actually watch it to the end? (or was it too long) > Yes... not too long... explained the issue up front and is a growing > concern. I can see it being useful > > - Did if feel corporate or startupy? > it felt more corporatish for me... but I suspect that is exactly your > target. > > Maybe background music along with it? > > Again, apologies James... I misread. I hope you find my feedback helpful. > > > > > > > On Wed, Aug 15, 2012 at 3:14 PM, Alwin Chin <alwin...@gmail.com<javascript:> > > wrote: > >> Hey James, >> >> Rocking video and product concept. >> >> - Did you find it interesting or boring? >> Not boring at all >> >> - Do you understand what the product actually does? >> Got the idea >> >> - Did you actually watch it to the end? (or was it too long) >> I was glued and wanted to see the outtakes after the credits >> >> - Did if feel corporate or startupy? >> The video was very startupy, but it felt the product was more useful for >> corporate (I think the 'running a campaign' vibe got the corporate edge). >> >> >> Looking great James! Please keep me posted on how you are 'do-ing' with >> "Do". >> >> I'll put my hand up for your beta testing. >> >> >> On Wed, Aug 15, 2012 at 12:35 PM, James MacGregor >> <jsmacg...@gmail.com<javascript:> >> > wrote: >> >>> Just released an explainer video for a new startup I'm working on: >>> http://vimeo.com/47221542 >>> >>> It's an enterprise product that I'm trying to make a little sexier and >>> startupy. This video is just the first step of a bunch of marketing >>> material to come so I'd really like to know if I'm on track. >>> >>> What I want to know is: >>> - Did you find it interesting or boring? >>> - Do you understand what the product actually does? >>> - Did you actually watch it to the end? (or was it too long) >>> - Did if feel corporate or startupy? >>> >>> Any feedback appreciated. >>> >>> -- >>> James MacGregor >>> >>> (mobile) +61 415996507 >>> (skype) jsmacgregor76 >>> (twitter) @jamessmacgregor <https://twitter.com/#!/jamessmacgregor> >>> (email) jsmacg...@gmail.com <javascript:> >>> >>> -- >>> You received this message because you are subscribed to the Silicon >>> Beach Australia mailing list. Vist http://siliconbeachaustralia.org for >>> more >>> >>> Forum rules >>> 1) No lurkers! It is expected that you introduce yourself. >>> 2) No jobs postings. You can use http://siliconbeachaustralia.org/jobs >>> >>> >>> To post to this group, send email to >>> silicon-bea...@googlegroups.com <javascript:> >>> To unsubscribe from this group, send email to >>> silicon-beach-australia+unsubscr...@googlegroups.com <javascript:> >>> For more options, visit this group at >>> http://groups.google.com/group/silicon-beach-australia?hl=en?hl=en >>> >> >> >> >> -- >> Best regards, >> Alwin Chin >> 0414 633 562 >> >> > > > -- > Best regards, > Alwin Chin > 0414 633 562 > > -- You received this message because you are subscribed to the Silicon Beach Australia mailing list. Vist http://siliconbeachaustralia.org for more Forum rules 1) No lurkers! It is expected that you introduce yourself. 2) No jobs postings. You can use http://siliconbeachaustralia.org/jobs To post to this group, send email to silicon-beach-australia@googlegroups.com To unsubscribe from this group, send email to silicon-beach-australia+unsubscr...@googlegroups.com For more options, visit this group at http://groups.google.com/group/silicon-beach-australia?hl=en?hl=en
