Hah... just realised I clicked the wrong video... FAIL!!!! on my behalf.
Drats Oliver, the Youtube video you posted took up half my Gmail page (Google preferential). Difficult to compare after seeing Do Sorry James... But I'll give my proper feedback now. - Did you find it interesting or boring? It is interesting... but I think can be spruced up better. The colour usage (pastel) felt a little bland. - Do you understand what the product actually does? Yeap got it... but definitely better targeted to Risk Managers. I think the narration with the graphic worked well. - Did you actually watch it to the end? (or was it too long) Yes... not too long... explained the issue up front and is a growing concern. I can see it being useful - Did if feel corporate or startupy? it felt more corporatish for me... but I suspect that is exactly your target. Maybe background music along with it? Again, apologies James... I misread. I hope you find my feedback helpful. On Wed, Aug 15, 2012 at 3:14 PM, Alwin Chin <alwin.c...@gmail.com> wrote: > Hey James, > > Rocking video and product concept. > > - Did you find it interesting or boring? > Not boring at all > > - Do you understand what the product actually does? > Got the idea > > - Did you actually watch it to the end? (or was it too long) > I was glued and wanted to see the outtakes after the credits > > - Did if feel corporate or startupy? > The video was very startupy, but it felt the product was more useful for > corporate (I think the 'running a campaign' vibe got the corporate edge). > > > Looking great James! Please keep me posted on how you are 'do-ing' with > "Do". > > I'll put my hand up for your beta testing. > > > On Wed, Aug 15, 2012 at 12:35 PM, James MacGregor <jsmacgrego...@gmail.com > > wrote: > >> Just released an explainer video for a new startup I'm working on: >> http://vimeo.com/47221542 >> >> It's an enterprise product that I'm trying to make a little sexier and >> startupy. This video is just the first step of a bunch of marketing >> material to come so I'd really like to know if I'm on track. >> >> What I want to know is: >> - Did you find it interesting or boring? >> - Do you understand what the product actually does? >> - Did you actually watch it to the end? (or was it too long) >> - Did if feel corporate or startupy? >> >> Any feedback appreciated. >> >> -- >> James MacGregor >> >> (mobile) +61 415996507 >> (skype) jsmacgregor76 >> (twitter) @jamessmacgregor <https://twitter.com/#!/jamessmacgregor> >> (email) jsmacgrego...@gmail.com >> >> -- >> You received this message because you are subscribed to the Silicon Beach >> Australia mailing list. Vist http://siliconbeachaustralia.org for more >> >> Forum rules >> 1) No lurkers! It is expected that you introduce yourself. >> 2) No jobs postings. You can use http://siliconbeachaustralia.org/jobs >> >> >> To post to this group, send email to >> silicon-beach-australia@googlegroups.com >> To unsubscribe from this group, send email to >> silicon-beach-australia+unsubscr...@googlegroups.com >> For more options, visit this group at >> http://groups.google.com/group/silicon-beach-australia?hl=en?hl=en >> > > > > -- > Best regards, > Alwin Chin > 0414 633 562 > > -- Best regards, Alwin Chin 0414 633 562 -- You received this message because you are subscribed to the Silicon Beach Australia mailing list. Vist http://siliconbeachaustralia.org for more Forum rules 1) No lurkers! It is expected that you introduce yourself. 2) No jobs postings. You can use http://siliconbeachaustralia.org/jobs To post to this group, send email to silicon-beach-australia@googlegroups.com To unsubscribe from this group, send email to silicon-beach-australia+unsubscr...@googlegroups.com For more options, visit this group at http://groups.google.com/group/silicon-beach-australia?hl=en?hl=en
