Great graphics on the video. As others have said the voice could use some improvements. It might be worth finding someone on http://voicebunny.com/ to do the voice over. As we've found out at castifyapp there is a huge difference in voices and it's really important to get the right one!
Fantastic product idea by the way. Hopefully it takes off for you. Cheers, Rick On Wednesday, 15 August 2012 12:35:55 UTC+10, James MacGregor wrote: > > Just released an explainer video for a new startup I'm working on: > http://vimeo.com/47221542 > > It's an enterprise product that I'm trying to make a little sexier and > startupy. This video is just the first step of a bunch of marketing > material to come so I'd really like to know if I'm on track. > > What I want to know is: > - Did you find it interesting or boring? > - Do you understand what the product actually does? > - Did you actually watch it to the end? (or was it too long) > - Did if feel corporate or startupy? > > Any feedback appreciated. > > -- > James MacGregor > > (mobile) +61 415996507 > (skype) jsmacgregor76 > (twitter) @jamessmacgregor <https://twitter.com/#%21/jamessmacgregor> > (email) jsmacg...@gmail.com <javascript:> > -- You received this message because you are subscribed to the Silicon Beach Australia mailing list. Vist http://siliconbeachaustralia.org for more Forum rules 1) No lurkers! It is expected that you introduce yourself. 2) No jobs postings. You can use http://siliconbeachaustralia.org/jobs To post to this group, send email to silicon-beach-australia@googlegroups.com To unsubscribe from this group, send email to silicon-beach-australia+unsubscr...@googlegroups.com For more options, visit this group at http://groups.google.com/group/silicon-beach-australia?hl=en?hl=en
