On Wed, 22 Oct 2008 at 05:36PM -0500, Jason Grout wrote: > For me, one of the very big features on the notebook is that it's online > and it enhances collaboration. It's very easy for me to post up a > worksheet for my class or my collaborators can download or modify. So > what about making the last item: > > visualize, manipulate, collaborate > > With Sage, you can plot functions and data for better understanding. > You can interact through manipulators and collaborate with the web-based > notebook interface. It's free and open source: download today at > www.sagemath.org. > > > (note that there should be a comma after "Sage", even in the current text)
I like the "visualize, manipulate, collaborate" idea (if it fits in one line). Overall the visual design is excellent; good job Harald! I'd also like to see the "Numerous methods" bit replaced by something that sounds more natural...perhaps emphasize that Sage doesn't just *include* a lot of software, it brings it together. Here's an idea for that sentence: Numerous software packages are unified so you can explore and answer your questions. (I'd use "answer" since you used "questions" earlier; use "solution" if you say "problem".) I don't quite know about "unified", though; maybe "connected"? Dan -- --- Dan Drake <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> ----- KAIST Department of Mathematical Sciences ------- http://mathsci.kaist.ac.kr/~drake
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