I also believe the bottom graph looks noisy. Maybe clipping only the first third of the graph and stretching it to fill the ad's width could make it better?
Otherwise, it looks like a very quality work. What did you use to design it? Inkscape? , Ronan Paixão Em Qua, 2008-10-22 às 16:56 -0700, mhampton escreveu: > I don't really like the bottom, it seems too busy to me with the graph > in the background. I really like the top three panels. > > I'm curious why this is going in a newspaper - ? > > Cheers, > Marshall > > On Oct 22, 5:01 pm, "Harald Schilly" <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote: > > Hi all, as those who attended SD10 already know, I was working on an > > advertisement for Sage. Before it gets actually printed (on real > > paper), I want to collect some feedback, especially since I've never > > done such a thing before... What bothers me most is the text, please > > do proofreading or suggest new sentences. > > for everything else:http://sage.math.washington.edu/home/schilly/ad/ > > > > harald > > --~--~---------~--~----~------------~-------~--~----~ To post to this group, send email to sage-devel@googlegroups.com To unsubscribe from this group, send email to [EMAIL PROTECTED] For more options, visit this group at http://groups.google.com/group/sage-devel URLs: http://www.sagemath.org -~----------~----~----~----~------~----~------~--~---
