On Oct 22, 2008, at 7:13 PM, Ronan Paixão wrote:

> I also believe the bottom graph looks noisy.
> Maybe clipping only the first third of the graph and stretching it to
> fill the ad's width could make it better?

I actually like the graph at the bottom, but it also depends on how  
large a format this is going to be. The idea of stretching it out to  
reduce business could work well.

>
> Otherwise, it looks like a very quality work. What did you use to  
> design
> it? Inkscape?
>
> ,
> Ronan Paixão
>
> Em Qua, 2008-10-22 às 16:56 -0700, mhampton escreveu:
>> I don't really like the bottom, it seems too busy to me with the  
>> graph
>> in the background.  I really like the top three panels.
>>
>> I'm curious why this is going in a newspaper - ?
>>
>> Cheers,
>> Marshall
>>
>> On Oct 22, 5:01 pm, "Harald Schilly" <[EMAIL PROTECTED]>  
>> wrote:
>>> Hi all, as those who attended SD10 already know, I was working on an
>>> advertisement for Sage. Before it gets actually printed (on real
>>> paper), I want to collect some feedback, especially since I've never
>>> done such a thing before... What bothers me most is the text, please
>>> do proofreading or suggest new sentences.
>>> for everything else:http://sage.math.washington.edu/home/schilly/ad/
>>>
>>> harald
>>>
>
>
> >


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