On Thu, Oct 23, 2008 at 9:13 AM, David Joyner <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote: > > This looks beautiful. It looks fine to me. Some grammatical ideas: > (a) I think you can say "open source" instead of "open-source, even though > what you have is correct.
On a note of consistency, the text "open-source" appears in large sized font at the top. But "open source" (without the dash) appears at the bottom in smaller sized font. On www.sagemath.org, there's the same mixture of "open-source" and "open source". I would use "open source" --- without the dash --- throughout the ad (as well as on the Sage home page). -- Regards Minh Van Nguyen Web: http://nguyenminh2.googlepages.com Blog: http://mvngu.wordpress.com --~--~---------~--~----~------------~-------~--~----~ To post to this group, send email to sage-devel@googlegroups.com To unsubscribe from this group, send email to [EMAIL PROTECTED] For more options, visit this group at http://groups.google.com/group/sage-devel URLs: http://www.sagemath.org -~----------~----~----~----~------~----~------~--~---
