I don't really like the bottom, it seems too busy to me with the graph in the background. I really like the top three panels.
I'm curious why this is going in a newspaper - ? Cheers, Marshall On Oct 22, 5:01 pm, "Harald Schilly" <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote: > Hi all, as those who attended SD10 already know, I was working on an > advertisement for Sage. Before it gets actually printed (on real > paper), I want to collect some feedback, especially since I've never > done such a thing before... What bothers me most is the text, please > do proofreading or suggest new sentences. > for everything else:http://sage.math.washington.edu/home/schilly/ad/ > > harald --~--~---------~--~----~------------~-------~--~----~ To post to this group, send email to sage-devel@googlegroups.com To unsubscribe from this group, send email to [EMAIL PROTECTED] For more options, visit this group at http://groups.google.com/group/sage-devel URLs: http://www.sagemath.org -~----------~----~----~----~------~----~------~--~---
