>> Section 2: >> >> OLD: >> Validated Split Horizon: Indicates that a split-horizon >> configuration for some name is considered "validated" if the >> client has confirmed that a parent of that name has authorized >> this resolver to serve its own responses for that name. >> >> NEW: >> Validated Split Horizon: A split-horizon >> configuration for some name is considered "validated" if the >> client has confirmed that a parent of that name has authorized >> this resolver to serve its own responses for that name.
> [rfced] We added the word "that" in order to keep the sentence-fragment > style used in all four list items. Please let us know > if you would prefer > your complete-sentence style for all four items. Sentence-fragment style is fine, but I find the adjusted text hard to parse. Let's try this change: OLD: A split-horizon configuration that for some name is considered "validated" if the client has confirmed that a parent of that name has authorized this resolver to serve its own responses for that name. NEW: A split-horizon configuration that is authorized by the parents of the affected names and confirmed by the client. --Ben
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