On Dec 18, 2007 3:17 PM, Devendra Laulkar <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote: > Hi, > > > I checked V0.003 PDF file. Great Work !!! > Thanks. Please check the new v1.0 version that I just uploaded. > Its now a 2 page flyer, A4 sheet printed on both sides. > One side contains basic information, second one contains the application > list. > Files :- > http://www.laulkar.com/files/flyer.odt > http://www.laulkar.com/files/flyer.pdf > http://www.laulkar.com/files/flyer.sxw > > Great work!
Some trivial suggestions (newline separated)- Should we have the 'Recommended distributions' and the distro specific links together ? Further, do we need to have a one-liner or a link about what a 'distribution' means ? Very minor -> s/openSuse/openSUSE Include debian in the 'developer/student distros' ? IMHO, going through man pages is not very fruitful for absolute beginners. How about having a link to some linux CLI tutorial in the basic commands section ? something like http://www.tuxfiles.org/linuxhelp/cli.html Should we have `fdisk` and `free` in the list ? IMHO, fdisk is an intermediate/advanced command and the output of free is not very helpful for a noob. How about including `top` and `find` ? Mention 'FOSS' in parentheses near 'Free & Open Source software' ? s/Gaim/Pidgin ? s/Exlporer/Explorer My 2 cents... Best regards, Pranav -------------------------------------------------------------- || Maa kuru dhana jana youvana garvam harati nimeshaat kaalaha sarvam || -- ______________________________________________________________________ Pune GNU/Linux Users Group Mailing List: (plug-mail@plug.org.in) List Information: http://plug.org.in/cgi-bin/mailman/listinfo/plug-mail Send 'help' to [EMAIL PROTECTED] for mailing instructions.
