Hi Elwyn I have now been through your comments and produced an updated version of the draft. It is available from here: https://kau.toke.dk/ietf/draft-ietf-aqm-fq-codel-06.html (or .txt if you prefer).
Most of your comments I have just incorporated (variants of), with a single stylistic exception as noted below. I *think* I managed to cover everything, but I did this in two sittings, so something may have slipped through the cracks, I suppose. Let me know if that is the case. I believe Dave has replied to most of your other comments, so I won't go through them again unless you point out something I missed. For the full diff (of the source document), see here: https://github.com/dtaht/bufferbloat-rfcs/commit/0d7f1963cc27d11129bcb5fe2affb90ebc6e67d3 Cheers, -Toke Elwyn Davies <[email protected]> writes: > General: It would be helpful to capitalize Quantum throughout (or at > least from s3 onwards) to emphasise that it is a configured value. > Likewise Interval and Target parameters. Maybe also Flow and Queue as > they a defined terms. I think this is the only stylistic change I haven't made. I thought it made it more difficult to read, not less. _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
