Hi Sandy, all, Please see inline.
Cheers, Med > -----Message d'origine----- > De : Sandy Ginoza <sgin...@staff.rfc-editor.org> > Envoyé : vendredi 21 février 2025 17:42 > À : Benoit Claise <benoit.cla...@huawei.com> > Cc : debcool...@gmail.com via RT <iana-mat...@iana.org>; Aitken, > Paul <pait...@ciena.com>; Thomas.Graf <thomas.g...@swisscom.com>; > RFC Editor <rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org>; opsawg-cha...@ietf.org; > opsawg-...@ietf.org; BOUCADAIR Mohamed INNOV/NET > <mohamed.boucad...@orange.com>; Mahesh Jethanandani > <mjethanand...@gmail.com>; Benoit Claise > <benoit.claise=40huawei....@dmarc.ietf.org>; auth48archive@rfc- > editor.org > Objet : Reference questions - Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9710 <draft- > ietf-opsawg-ipfix-fixes-12> for your review > > > Hi again, > > Apologies - I spoke too soon. May we update these references as > follows? > > 1) RFC 4646 has been obsoleted by RFC 5646 (BCP 47)? May we > update the text to refer to RFC 5646? > [Med] We have considered that one in the past but decided to leave the OLD for the reasons in https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/opsawg/isMt-QcqpKiM03krGRa9g1PSwsk/ > 7.4.2. NEW > > Description: A UTF-8 [RFC3629] encoded Unicode string > containing a > human-readable description of an Information Element. The > content > of the informationElementDescription MAY be annotated with > one or > more language tags [RFC4646], encoded in-line [RFC2482] > within the > UTF-8 string, . > > 2) RFC 5102 has been obsoleted by RFC 7012. We see the following > note about this in the RFC. Is it correct for the NEW text to > continue to refer to RFC 5102? > > Note that, as per Section 5 of [RFC7012], [IANA-IPFIX] is the > normative reference for the IPFIX IEs that were defined in > [RFC5102]. > [Med] Changing Section 5 of 5102 to Section of 7012 is broken given that Section of 7012 does not define IEs. I would leave 5102 for consistency. Thanks. > > Examples where NEW text refers to RFC 5102: > > 6.12.2. NEW > > Description: A description of the abstract data type of an > IPFIX > information element. These are taken from the abstract > data types > defined in Section 3.1 of the IPFIX Information Model > [RFC5102]; . > > > 6.13.2. NEW > > Description: A description of the semantics of an IPFIX > Information > Element. These are taken from the data type semantics > defined in > Section 3.2 of the IPFIX Information Model [RFC5102]; > > 6.14.2. NEW > > Description: A description of the units of an IPFIX > Information > Element. These correspond to the units implicitly defined > in the > Information Element definitions in Section 5 of the IPFIX > Information Model [RFC5102]; > > > 3) RFC 9565 obsoletes RFC 7125. Please note that we changed > "updates" to "obsoletes for accuracy. > [Med] ACK. > When the Operations and Management Area Working Group (OPSAWG) > was > considering [RFC9565], which updates [RFC7125], . > > Current: > When the Operations and Management Area Working Group (OPSAWG) > was > considering [RFC9565], which obsoletes [RFC7125], > > The current files are available here: > > https://eur03.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2 > Fwww.rfc- > editor.org%2Fauthors%2Frfc9710.xml&data=05%7C02%7Cmohamed.boucada > ir%40orange.com%7C5c449be08c0f42a2555408dd5296e361%7C90c7a20af34b > 40bfbc48b9253b6f5d20%7C0%7C0%7C638757530480129803%7CUnknown%7CTWF > pbGZsb3d8eyJFbXB0eU1hcGkiOnRydWUsIlYiOiIwLjAuMDAwMCIsIlAiOiJXaW4z > MiIsIkFOIjoiTWFpbCIsIldUIjoyfQ%3D%3D%7C0%7C%7C%7C&sdata=q%2FsPd0a > qq4tU8PwC%2B9J1BTIAVMr3mX9ZX%2FvPLeBb5eA%3D&reserved=0 > > https://eur03.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2 > Fwww.rfc- > 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https://eur03.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2 > Fwww.rfc-editor.org%2Fauthors%2Frfc9710- > auth48rfcdiff.html&data=05%7C02%7Cmohamed.boucadair%40orange.com% > 7C5c449be08c0f42a2555408dd5296e361%7C90c7a20af34b40bfbc48b9253b6f > 5d20%7C0%7C0%7C638757530480334814%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJFbXB > 0eU1hcGkiOnRydWUsIlYiOiIwLjAuMDAwMCIsIlAiOiJXaW4zMiIsIkFOIjoiTWFp > bCIsIldUIjoyfQ%3D%3D%7C0%7C%7C%7C&sdata=dX9y7YIh3ikbiHFzwz%2BWTYn > 8qZ%2FbLE06bOlzDnsdefg%3D&reserved=0 (side by side) > > Comprehensive diffs: > > https://eur03.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2 > Fwww.rfc-editor.org%2Fauthors%2Frfc9710- > diff.html&data=05%7C02%7Cmohamed.boucadair%40orange.com%7C5c449be > 08c0f42a2555408dd5296e361%7C90c7a20af34b40bfbc48b9253b6f5d20%7C0% > 7C0%7C638757530480342772%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJFbXB0eU1hcGki > OnRydWUsIlYiOiIwLjAuMDAwMCIsIlAiOiJXaW4zMiIsIkFOIjoiTWFpbCIsIldUI > joyfQ%3D%3D%7C0%7C%7C%7C&sdata=btkFbxgr%2BRRCLsgLqD3%2BazZMB6CZxn > 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We have received all of the needed > approvals and will continue with publication shortly. > > > > Thank you, > > RFC Editor/sg > > > >> On Feb 20, 2025, at 1:09 AM, Benoit Claise > <benoit.cla...@huawei.com> wrote: > >> > >> Thank you Sabrina and Sandy, > >> > >> All looks good to me. > >> > >> Regards, Benoit > >> > >> > >> On 2/19/2025 11:00 PM, Sabrina Tanamal via RT wrote: > >>> Hi Sandy, Paul, all, > >>> > >>> We've updated the registry to reflect the changes in the diff > and fixed the typos, as noted by Paul (thank you for pointing > these out): > >>> > >>> > https://eur03.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2 > Fww > >>> > w.iana.org%2Fassignments%2Fipfix&data=05%7C02%7Cmohamed.boucadair > %40 > >>> > orange.com%7C5c449be08c0f42a2555408dd5296e361%7C90c7a20af34b40bfb > c48 > >>> > b9253b6f5d20%7C0%7C0%7C638757530480358358%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d > 8ey > >>> > JFbXB0eU1hcGkiOnRydWUsIlYiOiIwLjAuMDAwMCIsIlAiOiJXaW4zMiIsIkFOIjo > iTW > >>> > FpbCIsIldUIjoyfQ%3D%3D%7C0%7C%7C%7C&sdata=J2YkNCwUKzOPKy%2BRJr3p% > 2Bh > >>> Atw3N6P%2B2YaFP56aiquJU%3D&reserved=0 > >>> > >>> Let us know if any other changes are needed. > >>> > >>> Thanks, > >>> Sabrina > >>> > >>> On Wed Feb 19 19:48:34 2025, sgin...@staff.rfc-editor.org > wrote: > >>>> Hi Paul, Sabrina, Authors, > >>>> > >>>> I removed the two instances of '(previously the "X" > registry)'. I > >>>> also changed the citation tags for [RFC768] and [RFC791] > (removed > >>>> the leading zeros). > >>>> > >>>> > >>>>> Also, RFC9710 is not listed in the "Reference" column for > any of > >>>>> the changes. Whether that's an oversight in the RFC, or an > >>>>> expectation that IANA will automatically add it; I believe > it > >>>>> should be listed against each modified element. > >>>> Rather than add a reference for each entry, I added a > statement in > >>>> section 9. Please review and let us know if this addresses > your > >>>> concern. 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>>>> > >>>> > >>>> > >>>>> On Feb 19, 2025, at 6:56 AM, Aitken, Paul > <pait...@ciena.com> wrote: > >>>>> > >>>>> Sabrina, there are still some discrepancies between the > RFC-to-be > >>>>> and the registry. I've checked sections 4, 5, and 7 of the > >>>>> RFC-to-be, but not yet section 6. > >>>>> > >>>>> Also, RFC9710 is not listed in the "Reference" column for > any of > >>>>> the changes. Whether that's an oversight in the RFC, or an > >>>>> expectation that IANA will automatically add it; I believe > it > >>>>> should be listed against each modified element. > >>>>> > >>>>> > >>>>> 4.1.2. NEW / sourceTransportPort > >>>>> 4.2.2. NEW / destinationTransportPort 4.4.2. NEW / > >>>>> collectorTransportPort 4.5.2. NEW / exporterTransportPort > The RFC > >>>>> says "See [RFC0768]" while the registry says "See > [RFC768]". > >>>>> > >>>>> 262 messageMD5Checksum > >>>>> > >>>>> "messageScope Information lement" should be "messageScope > >>>>> Information Element" > >>>>> > >>>>> 285 anonymizationFlags > >>>>> > >>>>> The text is correct, but the right-hand edge of the table > is wonky. > >>>>> > >>>>> 340 informationElementDescription > >>>>> > >>>>> "with its ownlanguage tag" should be "with its own language > tag". > >>>>> > >>>>> > >>>>> P. > >> > > ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Ce message et ses pieces jointes peuvent contenir des informations confidentielles ou privilegiees et ne doivent donc pas etre diffuses, exploites ou copies sans autorisation. Si vous avez recu ce message par erreur, veuillez le signaler a l'expediteur et le detruire ainsi que les pieces jointes. 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