Thanks Sandy, that looks good. P.
On 19/02/25 19:47, Sandy Ginoza wrote: > Hi Paul, Sabrina, Authors, > > I removed the two instances of '(previously the "X" registry)’. I also > changed the citation tags for [RFC768] and [RFC791] (removed the leading > zeros). > > >> Also, RFC9710 is not listed in the "Reference" column for any of the >> changes. Whether that's an oversight in the RFC, or an expectation that IANA >> will automatically add it; I believe it should be listed against each >> modified element. > Rather than add a reference for each entry, I added a statement in section 9. > Please review and let us know if this addresses your concern. Thank you for > pointing out - we missed adding mention of this change. > > The current files are here: > > https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9710.xml__;!!OSsGDw!K_jmmrB-qJ76_20TrG6LNGDrsQTtEDsxHDdehFm1KnFO8UBCK4eYjODAk8B7K2hlBgNPsJcyOCNr3qxsE2kcJg$ > [rfc-editor[.]org] > > https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9710.txt__;!!OSsGDw!K_jmmrB-qJ76_20TrG6LNGDrsQTtEDsxHDdehFm1KnFO8UBCK4eYjODAk8B7K2hlBgNPsJcyOCNr3qyxiXQoJQ$ > [rfc-editor[.]org] > > https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9710.pdf__;!!OSsGDw!K_jmmrB-qJ76_20TrG6LNGDrsQTtEDsxHDdehFm1KnFO8UBCK4eYjODAk8B7K2hlBgNPsJcyOCNr3qwePJTXOw$ > [rfc-editor[.]org] > > https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9710.html__;!!OSsGDw!K_jmmrB-qJ76_20TrG6LNGDrsQTtEDsxHDdehFm1KnFO8UBCK4eYjODAk8B7K2hlBgNPsJcyOCNr3qxO0j_vSA$ > [rfc-editor[.]org] > > Diffs highlighting only the updates described above: > > https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9710-lastdiff.html__;!!OSsGDw!K_jmmrB-qJ76_20TrG6LNGDrsQTtEDsxHDdehFm1KnFO8UBCK4eYjODAk8B7K2hlBgNPsJcyOCNr3qzMgYDeSQ$ > [rfc-editor[.]org] > > https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9710-lastrfcdiff.html__;!!OSsGDw!K_jmmrB-qJ76_20TrG6LNGDrsQTtEDsxHDdehFm1KnFO8UBCK4eYjODAk8B7K2hlBgNPsJcyOCNr3qzxlG4CdQ$ > [rfc-editor[.]org] (side by side) > > AUTH48 diffs: > > https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9710-auth48diff.html__;!!OSsGDw!K_jmmrB-qJ76_20TrG6LNGDrsQTtEDsxHDdehFm1KnFO8UBCK4eYjODAk8B7K2hlBgNPsJcyOCNr3qwIf3xGbw$ > [rfc-editor[.]org] > > https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9710-auth48rfcdiff.html__;!!OSsGDw!K_jmmrB-qJ76_20TrG6LNGDrsQTtEDsxHDdehFm1KnFO8UBCK4eYjODAk8B7K2hlBgNPsJcyOCNr3qxNToSGAw$ > [rfc-editor[.]org] (side by side) > > Comprehensive diffs: > > https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9710-diff.html__;!!OSsGDw!K_jmmrB-qJ76_20TrG6LNGDrsQTtEDsxHDdehFm1KnFO8UBCK4eYjODAk8B7K2hlBgNPsJcyOCNr3qy-DPiSaw$ > [rfc-editor[.]org] > > https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9710-rfcdiff.html__;!!OSsGDw!K_jmmrB-qJ76_20TrG6LNGDrsQTtEDsxHDdehFm1KnFO8UBCK4eYjODAk8B7K2hlBgNPsJcyOCNr3qwe5fflkw$ > [rfc-editor[.]org] (side by side) > > > Please review and let us know if any further updates are needed. > > Thank you, > RFC Editor/sg > > > >> On Feb 19, 2025, at 6:56 AM, Aitken, Paul <pait...@ciena.com> wrote: >> >> Sabrina, there are still some discrepancies between the RFC-to-be and the >> registry. I've checked sections 4, 5, and 7 of the RFC-to-be, but not yet >> section 6. >> >> Also, RFC9710 is not listed in the "Reference" column for any of the >> changes. Whether that's an oversight in the RFC, or an expectation that IANA >> will automatically add it; I believe it should be listed against each >> modified element. >> >> >> 4.1.2. NEW / sourceTransportPort >> 4.2.2. NEW / destinationTransportPort >> 4.4.2. NEW / collectorTransportPort >> 4.5.2. NEW / exporterTransportPort >> The RFC says "See [RFC0768]" while the registry says "See [RFC768]". >> >> 262 messageMD5Checksum >> >> "messageScope Information lement" should be "messageScope Information >> Element" >> >> 285 anonymizationFlags >> >> The text is correct, but the right-hand edge of the table is wonky. >> >> 340 informationElementDescription >> >> "with its ownlanguage tag" should be "with its own language tag". >> >> >> P. -- auth48archive mailing list -- auth48archive@rfc-editor.org To unsubscribe send an email to auth48archive-le...@rfc-editor.org
