> On Jan 21, 2025, at 1:00 PM, Independent Submissions Editor (Eliot Lear) - 
> rfc-ise at rfc-editor.org <mailforwa...@cloudmails.net> wrote:
> 
> Hi!
> 
> All good with what Tony wrote, but perhaps here...
> 
> On 21.01.2025 21:37, Tony Li wrote:
>>  The goal of the routing architecture is to provide an organizational
>>   structure to protocols running on the satellite network such that
>>   topology information is conveyed through relevant portions of the
>>   network, paths are computed across the network, data 
>>   can be delivered along those paths, and the structure can scale 
>>   without any changes to the organizational structure.
> That sentence is a mouthful and there's a very minor tense problem.  I think 
> you're being just a bit too terse, but I won't stand on my head on this.  Do 
> you want to take another swing?
> 
> Eliot
> 

Ok, less terse:

The goal of the routing architecture is to provide an organizational structure 
to protocols running
on the satellite network. This architecture must convey topology information to 
relevant portions 
of the network.  This enables path computation that is used for data 
forwarding. The architecture
must also scale without global changes to the organizational structure.

Please feel to massage as you see fit.

Thanks,
T

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