CVSROOT:        /web/www
Module name:    www
Changes by:     Karl Berry <karl>       10/10/04 19:38:10

Modified files:
        distros        : free-system-distribution-guidelines.html 

Log message:
        more specifics on requests for listing

CVSWeb URLs:
http://web.cvs.savannah.gnu.org/viewcvs/www/distros/free-system-distribution-guidelines.html?cvsroot=www&r1=1.16&r2=1.17

Patches:
Index: free-system-distribution-guidelines.html
===================================================================
RCS file: /web/www/www/distros/free-system-distribution-guidelines.html,v
retrieving revision 1.16
retrieving revision 1.17
diff -u -b -r1.16 -r1.17
--- free-system-distribution-guidelines.html    30 Jul 2010 20:30:43 -0000      
1.16
+++ free-system-distribution-guidelines.html    4 Oct 2010 19:38:03 -0000       
1.17
@@ -186,20 +186,21 @@
 <p>We maintain a list of the <a href="/distros/free-distros.html">free
 system distributions</a> we know about.  If you know about a free
 distribution that isn't listed there, please have the developers write
-to us at &lt;<a class="reference"
-href="mailto:g...@gnu.org";>g...@gnu.org</a>&gt;.</p>
+to &lt;<a class="reference"
+href="mailto:g...@gnu.org";>g...@gnu.org</a>&gt; with a description of
+their system and a link to their web page.</p>
 
 <p>However, we will not list a distribution whose name makes confusion
 with non-free distributions likely.  For example, if Foobar Light is a free
 distribution and Foobar is a non-free distribution, we will not list
 Foobar Light.  This is because we expect that the distinction between
-the two would be lost in the process of communicating this
+the two would be lost in the process of communicating the
 message.</p>
 
 <p>If you have questions or comments about these guidelines
 themselves, feel free to send those to &lt;<a class="reference"
 href="mailto:licens...@gnu.org";>licens...@gnu.org</a>&gt;.  We hope
-this helps everyone better understand the issues that are important
+that they help everyone better understand the issues that are important
 for free system distributions, and we look forward to promoting more
 of them in the future.</p>
 
@@ -236,7 +237,7 @@
 <p>
 Updated:
 <!-- timestamp start -->
-$Date: 2010/07/30 20:30:43 $
+$Date: 2010/10/04 19:38:03 $
 <!-- timestamp end -->
 </p>
 </div>

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