> On Mar 3, 2017, at 05:56, Rodney W. Grimes 
> <freebsd-...@pdx.rh.cn85.dnsmgr.net> wrote:
> 
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>> "Ngie Cooper (yaneurabeya)" <yaneurab...@gmail.com> wrote
>>  in <1a3f6606-822c-4c80-adfa-48378f0f2...@gmail.com>:
>> 
>> ya> >> How about "...accepts UDP packets sent with any source port" or
> 
> I actually think this right here is the clearest one of all the ones
> I have seen attempted.  Oh, remove the s from accepts.

How about this instead (it incorporates hrs’s suggestion and your’s)?
Thanks,
-Ngie

$ svn diff syslogd.8
Index: syslogd.8
===================================================================
--- syslogd.8   (revision 314626)
+++ syslogd.8   (working copy)
@@ -131,7 +131,7 @@
 .Ar service
 of
 .Ql \&*
-allows packets to be received from any UDP port.
+accept UDP packets from any source port.
 The default
 .Ar service
 is

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