-- Start of PGP signed section. [ Charset ISO-8859-7 unsupported, converting... ] > "Ngie Cooper (yaneurabeya)" <yaneurab...@gmail.com> wrote > in <1a3f6606-822c-4c80-adfa-48378f0f2...@gmail.com>: > > ya> >> How about "...accepts UDP packets sent with any source port" or
I actually think this right here is the clearest one of all the ones I have seen attempted. Oh, remove the s from accepts. > ya> >> something? > ya> > > ya> > Yeah, that?s more accurate. > ya> > ya> How about this? > ya> -Ngie > ya> > ya> $ svn diff usr.sbin/syslogd/syslogd.8 > ya> Index: usr.sbin/syslogd/syslogd.8 > ya> =================================================================== > ya> --- usr.sbin/syslogd/syslogd.8 (revision 314585) > ya> +++ usr.sbin/syslogd/syslogd.8 (working copy) > ya> @@ -131,7 +131,7 @@ > ya> .Ar service > ya> of > ya> .Ql \&* > ya> -allows packets to be received from any UDP port. > ya> +allows UDP packets to be sent with any source port. > ya> The default > ya> .Ar service > ya> is > > Looks good to me though probably I am not the best person who can > judge an English expression as good or bad... > > -- Hiroki > -- End of PGP section, PGP failed! -- Rod Grimes rgri...@freebsd.org _______________________________________________ svn-src-head@freebsd.org mailing list https://lists.freebsd.org/mailman/listinfo/svn-src-head To unsubscribe, send any mail to "svn-src-head-unsubscr...@freebsd.org"
