Re: Doc: NR rewrite of 3.2 Titles and Headers (issue4124056)

2011-06-07 Thread pkx166h
On 2011/05/04 17:08:39, Carl wrote: Looks mostly good to me. Carl http://codereview.appspot.com/4124056/diff/32001/Documentation/notation/input.itely File Documentation/notation/input.itely (right): http://codereview.appspot.com/4124056/diff/32001/Documentation/notation/input.itely#newc

Re: Doc: NR rewrite of 3.2 Titles and Headers (issue4124056)

2011-05-26 Thread pkx166h
Pushed as 9bc65fa2efa4711ce96c648db6d703ae190f944c Graham, if you want to add your 'new' comments now here, I can pick these up and run with a new issue number for these changes. I still need to look at the 'second half' as you mentioned that in a comment in one of the earlier drafts, that 'for

Re: Doc: NR rewrite of 3.2 Titles and Headers (issue4124056)

2011-05-23 Thread Jan WarchoĊ‚
LGTM 2011/5/19 > On 2011/05/05 23:06:25, Graham Percival wrote: > > > http://codereview.appspot.com/4124056/diff/32001/Documentation/notation/input.itely > >> File Documentation/notation/input.itely (right): >> > > > > http://codereview.appspot.com/4124056/diff/32001/Documentation/notation/input

Re: Doc: NR rewrite of 3.2 Titles and Headers (issue4124056)

2011-05-20 Thread pkx166h
On 2011/05/05 23:06:25, Graham Percival wrote: http://codereview.appspot.com/4124056/diff/32001/Documentation/notation/input.itely File Documentation/notation/input.itely (right): http://codereview.appspot.com/4124056/diff/32001/Documentation/notation/input.itely#newcode674 Documentation/not

Re: Doc: NR rewrite of 3.2 Titles and Headers (issue4124056)

2011-05-06 Thread percival . music . ca
http://codereview.appspot.com/4124056/diff/32001/Documentation/notation/input.itely File Documentation/notation/input.itely (right): http://codereview.appspot.com/4124056/diff/32001/Documentation/notation/input.itely#newcode674 Documentation/notation/input.itely:674: @example On 2011/05/05 11:

Re: Doc: NR rewrite of 3.2 Titles and Headers (issue4124056)

2011-05-06 Thread Carl . D . Sorensen
Looks mostly good to me. Carl http://codereview.appspot.com/4124056/diff/32001/Documentation/notation/input.itely File Documentation/notation/input.itely (right): http://codereview.appspot.com/4124056/diff/32001/Documentation/notation/input.itely#newcode667 Documentation/notation/input.itely:

Re: Doc: NR rewrite of 3.2 Titles and Headers (issue4124056)

2011-05-06 Thread percival . music . ca
comments about the first section. http://codereview.appspot.com/4124056/diff/32001/Documentation/notation/input.itely File Documentation/notation/input.itely (right): http://codereview.appspot.com/4124056/diff/32001/Documentation/notation/input.itely#newcode674 Documentation/notation/input.itel

Re: Doc: NR rewrite of 3.2 Titles and Headers (issue4124056)

2011-05-06 Thread pkx166h
Draft 8 http://codereview.appspot.com/4124056/diff/32001/Documentation/notation/input.itely File Documentation/notation/input.itely (right): http://codereview.appspot.com/4124056/diff/32001/Documentation/notation/input.itely#newcode667 Documentation/notation/input.itely:667: Text fields left un

Re: Doc: NR rewrite of 3.2 Titles and Headers (issue4124056)

2011-05-04 Thread pkx166h
7th Draft up for review. Drafts 5 and 6 are not valid (one was just to keep the patch alive with lots of other recent changes and 6 was a mistake by me). Draft 4 was the last draft to have comments on so compare with 7 please. You can also see drafts 4 vs 3 to see what still has to be done - as

Re: Doc: NR rewrite of 3.2 Titles and Headers (issue4124056)

2011-04-27 Thread pkx166h
Just an updated. New Patch for @lilypond policy here http://codereview.appspot.com/4445070/ Once we have ratified this we can apply it to this one. http://codereview.appspot.com/4124056/ ___ lilypond-devel mailing list lilypond-devel@gnu.org https:/

Re: Doc: NR rewrite of 3.2 Titles and Headers (issue4124056)

2011-04-10 Thread pkx166h
5th Draft, nothing to really check (apart from Marks 3 spacing edits) but have removed the ly file now pushed in commit 524f726a5de0033e68525c65e58430de9b60b7ca So this is just some admin work so I know that the latest iteration of the patch is here. http://codereview.appspot.com/412405

Re: Doc: NR rewrite of 3.2 Titles and Headers (issue4124056)

2011-04-09 Thread percival . music . ca
http://codereview.appspot.com/4124056/diff/18001/Documentation/notation/input.itely File Documentation/notation/input.itely (right): http://codereview.appspot.com/4124056/diff/18001/Documentation/notation/input.itely#newcode548 Documentation/notation/input.itely:548: @lilypond[quote,verbatim,nor

Re: Doc: NR rewrite of 3.2 Titles and Headers (issue4124056)

2011-04-09 Thread markpolesky
Thanks again to everyone here for helping to finish what I started. I'll leave the style/content issues to the rest of you; the comments below are just nitpicks. - Mark http://codereview.appspot.com/4124056/diff/18001/Documentation/notation/input.itely File Documentation/notation/input.itely (

Re: Doc: NR rewrite of 3.2 Titles and Headers (issue4124056)

2011-04-09 Thread pkx166h
4th Draft posted. Still to do: Showing how 'breakbefore' works, as it was evident from recent mails that I need to go back and read the LM to see how to show this in an @lilypond. Also the last third of this patch still needs to be 'done' - we've left this until we get the first parts sorted. J

Re: Doc: NR rewrite of 3.2 Titles and Headers (issue4124056)

2011-02-25 Thread pkx166h
Third draft done - sorry it took so long. http://codereview.appspot.com/4124056/diff/9001/Documentation/notation/input.itely File Documentation/notation/input.itely (right): http://codereview.appspot.com/4124056/diff/9001/Documentation/notation/input.itely#newcode541 Documentation/notation/inpu

Re: Doc: NR rewrite of 3.2 Titles and Headers (issue4124056)

2011-02-14 Thread percival . music . ca
Read Usage and play with lilypond-book a bit on your own. 1. I want you to create a Tiny .tely file and compile it to a pdf. 2. play with a few [options] to the @lilypond[]s in your Tiny file. 3. in particular, play with linewidth and textheight or pageheight or page sizes or \paper { height = 5\m

Re: Doc: NR rewrite of 3.2 Titles and Headers (issue4124056)

2011-02-13 Thread pkx166h
Reviewers: Graham Percival, lilyfan_orange.fr, Trevor Daniels, t.daniels_treda.co.uk, james.lowe_datacore.com, graham_percival-music.ca, Message: Second draft been posted. I couldn't work out how to do one request so this has not been changed. Putting the tagline in an @lilypond without having

Re: Doc: NR rewrite of 3.2 Titles and Headers (issue4124056)

2011-02-07 Thread percival . music . ca
On 2011/02/06 17:48:56, Trevor Daniels wrote: This comment of mine from Mark's patch still applies, even after these changes: > I've looked at the compiled version now. It's nicely > written, but my concern is that this is no longer written > in 'reference' style. To me, parts of it seem mor

Re: Doc: NR rewrite of 3.2 Titles and Headers (issue4124056)

2011-02-07 Thread Trevor Daniels
wrote Sunday, February 06, 2011 8:41 PM On 2011/02/06 17:48:56, Trevor Daniels wrote: This comment of mine from Mark's patch still applies, even after these changes: > I've looked at the compiled version now. It's nicely > written, but my concern is that this is no longer written > in

Re: Doc: NR rewrite of 3.2 Titles and Headers (issue4124056)

2011-02-07 Thread Graham Percival
On Mon, Feb 07, 2011 at 01:41:45PM +, James Lowe wrote: > Where my skill falls down is if the new section names cannot be > moved lock stock and barrel over to the LM and I have to end up > making new nodes. Otherwise I can easily just cut/paste edited > chunks into the existing LM texi/tely fi

RE: Doc: NR rewrite of 3.2 Titles and Headers (issue4124056)

2011-02-07 Thread James Lowe
...@gmail.com Cc: re...@codereview.appspotmail.com; lilypond-devel@gnu.org Subject: Re: Doc: NR rewrite of 3.2 Titles and Headers (issue4124056) wrote Sunday, February 06, 2011 8:41 PM > > On 2011/02/06 17:48:56, Trevor Daniels wrote: >> > This comment of mine from Mark's patch still

Re: Doc: NR rewrite of 3.2 Titles and Headers (issue4124056)

2011-02-07 Thread tdanielsmusic
This comment of mine from Mark's patch still applies, even after these changes: I've looked at the compiled version now. It's nicely written, but my concern is that this is no longer written in 'reference' style. To me, parts of it seem more suited to the LM. The idea of the NR is that people

Re: Doc: NR rewrite of 3.2 Titles and Headers (issue4124056)

2011-02-07 Thread Graham Percival
On Mon, Feb 07, 2011 at 11:02:16AM -, Trevor Daniels wrote: > > I think the spacing controls are now so complex that > they really do need a 'learning' approach to help > users understand how to approach page layout. I'm probably missing something because I don't know what the new spacing con

Re: Doc: NR rewrite of 3.2 Titles and Headers (issue4124056)

2011-02-06 Thread Jean-Charles Malahieude
Le 06/02/2011 04:21, percival.music...@gmail.com disait : [...] Documentation/notation/input.itely:526: @subsection Creating titles, headers, and footers I get nervous when the @subsection doesn't match the @node, but I can't think of a definitely alternative after a few seconds. The only serious

Doc: NR rewrite of 3.2 Titles and Headers (issue4124056)

2011-02-05 Thread percival . music . ca
I've done a first pass at this. General comment: there's more "talking through the code" than I'd like. I'm willing to relax this a bit for Notation 3 instead of Notation 1+2, but I think it can be tightened up a bit with some work. Other than that, not bad at all! I think we're looking at 4-5