comments about the first section.
http://codereview.appspot.com/4124056/diff/32001/Documentation/notation/input.itely File Documentation/notation/input.itely (right): http://codereview.appspot.com/4124056/diff/32001/Documentation/notation/input.itely#newcode674 Documentation/notation/input.itely:674: @example We just spent a month working on a8landscape, precisely to avoid having an @example like this. Change to @lilypond. http://codereview.appspot.com/4124056/diff/32001/Documentation/notation/input.itely#newcode719 Documentation/notation/input.itely:719: clickable link (@url{http://www.lilypond.org}). Don't talk about it. Having the example already shows you the default tagline. http://codereview.appspot.com/4124056/diff/32001/Documentation/notation/input.itely#newcode730 Documentation/notation/input.itely:730: c4 d e f IIRC this produces two lines (I haven't compiled it). If so, do we need two lines? Why not just have one bar? Also, do we need a title? This is an example for a tagline, right? http://codereview.appspot.com/4124056/diff/32001/Documentation/notation/input.itely#newcode748 Documentation/notation/input.itely:748: c4 d e f This is good, but previous comments apply as well. Lose the title and one bar. http://codereview.appspot.com/4124056/diff/32001/Documentation/notation/input.itely#newcode755 Documentation/notation/input.itely:755: To remove the @code{tagline} set the value to to @code{##f}. this is fine; no need to another @lilypond here. http://codereview.appspot.com/4124056/ _______________________________________________ lilypond-devel mailing list lilypond-devel@gnu.org https://lists.gnu.org/mailman/listinfo/lilypond-devel
