[Gen-art] Antw: [EXT] [Ntp] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ntp-yang-data-model-12

2021-02-15 Thread Ulrich Windl
>>> Tim Evens via Datatracker schrieb am 13.02.2021 um 00:51 in Nachricht <161317387496.31377.7416127213693172...@ietfa.amsl.com>: ... > Are the backslashes required here? It seems that many examples have them > when > there is a value and the closing tag is not on the same line. For example: .

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-curdle-ssh-kex-sha2-14

2021-02-15 Thread Roni Even via Datatracker
Reviewer: Roni Even Review result: Almost Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more inform

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-calext-valarm-extensions-04

2021-02-15 Thread Roni Even via Datatracker
Reviewer: Roni Even Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more inf

Re: [Gen-art] [Last-Call] Antw: [EXT] [Ntp] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ntp-yang-data-model-12

2021-02-15 Thread tom petch
On 15/02/2021 08:54, Ulrich Windl wrote: Tim Evens via Datatracker schrieb am 13.02.2021 um 00:51 in Nachricht <161317387496.31377.7416127213693172...@ietfa.amsl.com>: ... Are the backslashes required here? It seems that many examples have them when there is a value and the closing tag is not

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-calext-valarm-extensions-04

2021-02-15 Thread Ken Murchison
Hi Roni, Thanks for the review.  Your comment is addressed below. On 2/15/21 5:32 AM, Roni Even via Datatracker wrote: Reviewer: Roni Even Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-lamps-cms-aes-gmac-alg-03

2021-02-15 Thread Stewart Bryant via Datatracker
Reviewer: Stewart Bryant Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more informat

Re: [Gen-art] [Last-Call] Antw: [EXT] [Ntp] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ntp-yang-data-model-12

2021-02-15 Thread Tim Evens (tievens)
Thanks, that makes sense. On 2/15/21, 4:01 AM, "tom petch" wrote: On 15/02/2021 08:54, Ulrich Windl wrote: Tim Evens via Datatracker schrieb am 13.02.2021 um 00:51 > in > Nachricht <161317387496.31377.7416127213693172...@ietfa.amsl.com>: > > ... >> Are the backslashes required here? It se

Re: [Gen-art] [Curdle] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-curdle-ssh-kex-sha2-14

2021-02-15 Thread Mark D. Baushke
Hi Roni, > Minor issues: > It is not clear what is the backward interoperability is, I noticed > that only rsa1024-sha1 is deprecated. It would be good to add some > text maybe in section 4 that will explain it and maybe have some > recommendations for client and server side. The simple answer is

Re: [Gen-art] [Curdle] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-curdle-ssh-kex-sha2-14

2021-02-15 Thread Ron Frederick
Hi Mark, A couple of minor issues with the recommended text (grammatical, not technical): On Feb 15, 2021, at 10:54 AM, Mark D. Baushke wrote: > Suggestion to the reviewer of replacement paragraphs before the table in > section 4 "Summary Guidance for Key Exchange Method Names Implementations"

Re: [Gen-art] [Curdle] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-curdle-ssh-kex-sha2-14

2021-02-15 Thread Mark D. Baushke
Ron Frederick writes: > Hi Mark, > > A couple of minor issues with the recommended text (grammatical, not > technical): As always, any feedback greatfully received. > On Feb 15, 2021, at 10:54 AM, Mark D. Baushke > wrote: > > Suggestion to the reviewer of replacement paragraphs before the ta

Re: [Gen-art] [Curdle] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-curdle-ssh-kex-sha2-14

2021-02-15 Thread Ron Frederick
Hi Mark, On Feb 15, 2021, at 1:06 PM, Mark D. Baushke wrote: > Ron Frederick writes: >> On Feb 15, 2021, at 10:54 AM, Mark D. Baushke >> wrote: >>> Suggestion to the reviewer of replacement paragraphs before the table in >>> section 4 "Summary Guidance for Key Exchange Method Names Implementat

Re: [Gen-art] [Detnet] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-detnet-tsn-vpn-over-mpls-05

2021-02-15 Thread Alissa Cooper
Vijay, thanks for your review. Balázs, thanks for responding. I entered a No Objection ballot. Alissa > On Feb 8, 2021, at 3:44 PM, Balázs Varga A > wrote: > > Hi Vijay, > Many thanks for your review. > I will fix your nits in the next version. (See inline) > Thanks > Bala'zs > > -Origi

Re: [Gen-art] [Curdle] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-curdle-ssh-kex-sha2-14

2021-02-15 Thread Mark D. Baushke
Ron Frederick writes: > Hi Mark, > > On Feb 15, 2021, at 1:06 PM, Mark D. Baushke wrote: > > Ron Frederick writes: > >> On Feb 15, 2021, at 10:54 AM, Mark D. Baushke > >> wrote: > >>> Suggestion to the reviewer of replacement paragraphs before the table in > >>> section 4 "Summary Guidance f

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-core-echo-request-tag-11

2021-02-15 Thread Alissa Cooper
Ines, thanks for your review. Christian, thanks for your response. I entered a No Objection ballot. Alissa > On Dec 9, 2020, at 9:10 AM, Christian M. Amsüss wrote: > > Hello Ines, > > thanks for your comments. > > The expansions are done or WIP in our version, and will be part of the > next

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-tsvwg-transport-encrypt-19

2021-02-15 Thread Joel Halpern via Datatracker
Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Ready with Issues I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For mor

Re: [Gen-art] [Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-regext-rfc7482bis-02

2021-02-15 Thread Benjamin Kaduk
Hi Scott, > Dan, thanks for the review. Would you please give me a little more on > what you think is needed to explain the relationship between the two > documents? I can't think of much more to say beyond "7482 describes > protocol queries" and "7483 describes protocol responses to the queries >

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-6lo-plc-05

2021-02-15 Thread Meral Shirazipour via Datatracker
Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour Review result: Almost Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For mor