Vijay, thanks for your review. Balázs, thanks for responding. I entered a No Objection ballot.
Alissa > On Feb 8, 2021, at 3:44 PM, Balázs Varga A > <balazs.a.varga=40ericsson....@dmarc.ietf.org> wrote: > > Hi Vijay, > Many thanks for your review. > I will fix your nits in the next version. (See inline) > Thanks > Bala'zs > > -----Original Message----- > From: detnet <detnet-boun...@ietf.org <mailto:detnet-boun...@ietf.org>> On > Behalf Of Vijay Gurbani via Datatracker > Sent: Friday, January 29, 2021 3:58 PM > To: gen-art@ietf.org <mailto:gen-art@ietf.org> > Cc: last-c...@ietf.org <mailto:last-c...@ietf.org>; det...@ietf.org > <mailto:det...@ietf.org>; draft-ietf-detnet-tsn-vpn-over-mpls....@ietf.org > <mailto:draft-ietf-detnet-tsn-vpn-over-mpls....@ietf.org> > Subject: [Detnet] Genart last call review of > draft-ietf-detnet-tsn-vpn-over-mpls-05 > > Reviewer: Vijay Gurbani > Review result: Ready > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review > Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the > IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call > comments. > > For more information, please see the FAQ at > > <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. > > Document: draft-ietf-detnet-tsn-vpn-over-mpls-05 > Reviewer: Vijay K. Gurbani > Review Date: 2021-01-29 > IETF LC End Date: 2021-02-05 > IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat > > Summary: Ready to be published as a Proposed Standard. > > Generally, the I-D is quite heavy on acronyms, some of which I suspect comes > with the domain the I-D targets. While I suspect that most readers versed in > the area will not have any problems expanding the acronyms, I just wanted to > mention this for the authors to perhaps do a once-over to see if any acronyms > need expansion. (I list a couple in the Nits section.) > > Major issues: 0 > > Minor issues: 0 > > Nits/editorial comments: 2 > > - Figure 2: - What is "Tnl"? (Tunnel?) > - What does "AC" mean? > > <Balazs> Thanks. Yes Tnl means Tunnel and AC means Attachment Circuit. > I will update the figure. > > - IDnits is reporting a couple of unused references ([RFC5921] and > [RFC8660]), and that draft-ietf-detnet-mpls has been published as > RFC 8964. > > <Balazs> Ack. Thanks. > > _______________________________________________ > detnet mailing list > det...@ietf.org <mailto:det...@ietf.org> > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/detnet > <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/detnet> > > _______________________________________________ > Gen-art mailing list > Gen-art@ietf.org <mailto:Gen-art@ietf.org> > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art > <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art>
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