Hi Mark, On Feb 15, 2021, at 1:06 PM, Mark D. Baushke <m...@juniper.net> wrote: > Ron Frederick <r...@timeheart.net> writes: >> On Feb 15, 2021, at 10:54 AM, Mark D. Baushke >> <mdb=40juniper....@dmarc.ietf.org> wrote: >>> Suggestion to the reviewer of replacement paragraphs before the table in >>> section 4 "Summary Guidance for Key Exchange Method Names Implementations" >>> >>> [snip] >>> It is suggested that the MUST NOT key exchange method code be >>> removed from the any implementations using them. >> >> This should be “from any” instead of “from the any”. > > Hmmm... I seem to have managed to lose what I intended to write. I will > suggest this as a replacement: > > It is suggested that the code which implements a "MUST NOT" key > exchange method have that implementation code be removed.
There’s some redundancy with “code” here twice, and “have..be” still doesn’t read right. I’d suggest: It is suggested that the code which implements a "MUST NOT" key exchange method be removed from implementations that contain it. > Thank you very much for your review of the text I wrote. No problem! -- Ron Frederick r...@timeheart.net _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
