Hi Dark, Well, it sounds like a good approach. I see where you are going and I'd be happy to review it when you are done with it.
Cheers! On 6/21/15, dark <[email protected]> wrote: > Hi Tom. > > The process and tone I'm trying to go for myself in the sample I'm working > on is much more, "computers do lots of good stuff, have you ever thought of > > playing games with them?" type of approach, starting with perhaps what the > person has been told, or if the person is not a computer user, starting with > > the general and working to the specific. > > I'm not entirely happy with the word order yet but as I said that is why I > am trying to be as careful as I can about draughting this thing. > > Beware the grue! > > Dark. > > > --- > Gamers mailing list __ [email protected] > If you want to leave the list, send E-mail to > [email protected]. > You can make changes or update your subscription via the web, at > http://audyssey.org/mailman/listinfo/gamers_audyssey.org. > All messages are archived and can be searched and read at > http://www.mail-archive.com/[email protected]. > If you have any questions or concerns regarding the management of the list, > please send E-mail to [email protected]. > --- Gamers mailing list __ [email protected] If you want to leave the list, send E-mail to [email protected]. You can make changes or update your subscription via the web, at http://audyssey.org/mailman/listinfo/gamers_audyssey.org. All messages are archived and can be searched and read at http://www.mail-archive.com/[email protected]. If you have any questions or concerns regarding the management of the list, please send E-mail to [email protected].
