On Thu, Dec 09, 2010 at 11:40:20AM +0100, Holger Levsen wrote: > > http://wiki.debconf.org/wiki/StandardsOfRespect#Short_version > > I've done s/Disrespect can include outright harassment or creating of an > unsafe or unwelcoming environment./Disrespect can include outright harassment > or creating of an unwelcoming environment./ > > "Unsafe environment" is just too vague. Unsafe for whom?
I figured this out: the goal was to hint that unacceptable was not just overt acts, but also making it a threatening environment. A friend suggested merging two sentences, now it reads this: """ All attendees are expected to treat all people and facilities with respect and help create a welcoming environment. """ ... which I think sounds better. - richard -- | Richard Darst - rkd@ - boltzmann: up 517 days, 4 | http://rkd.zgib.net - pgp 0xBD356740 | "Ye shall know the truth and -- the truth shall make you free" _______________________________________________ Debconf-team mailing list Debconf-team@lists.debconf.org http://lists.debconf.org/mailman/listinfo/debconf-team
