Great! So noted (https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9704). Thank you, Med!
RFC Editor/lb > On Jan 27, 2025, at 9:07 AM, mohamed.boucad...@orange.com wrote: > > Hi Lynne, > > The changes look good to me. Thanks for your patience. > > Cheers, > Med > >> -----Message d'origine----- >> De : Lynne Bartholomew <lbartholo...@staff.rfc-editor.org> >> Envoyé : lundi 27 janvier 2025 17:52 >> À : BOUCADAIR Mohamed INNOV/NET <mohamed.boucad...@orange.com> >> Cc : tirumal reddy <kond...@gmail.com>; Ben Schwartz >> <bem...@meta.com>; Éric Vyncke <evyn...@cisco.com>; Dan Wing >> <danw...@gmail.com>; kevin.sm...@vodafone.com; Ben Schwartz >> <bemasc=40meta....@dmarc.ietf.org>; rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org; >> Ben Schwartz <i...@bemasc.net>; add-...@ietf.org; add- >> cha...@ietf.org; auth48archive@rfc-editor.org >> Objet : Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9704 <draft-ietf-add-split-horizon- >> authority-14> for your review >> >> >> Hi, Med. >> >> Please let us know whether or not this document is ready for >> publication in its current form (following the latest updates per >> your notes further below). >> >> We now have all author approvals >> (https://eur03.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F% >> 2Fwww.rfc- >> editor.org%2Fauth48%2Frfc9704&data=05%7C02%7Cmohamed.boucadair%40 >> orange.com%7C48507eee672b4a17ef7f08dd3ef3471f%7C90c7a20af34b40bfb >> c48b9253b6f5d20%7C0%7C0%7C638735937045115913%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZs >> b3d8eyJFbXB0eU1hcGkiOnRydWUsIlYiOiIwLjAuMDAwMCIsIlAiOiJXaW4zMiIsI >> kFOIjoiTWFpbCIsIldUIjoyfQ%3D%3D%7C0%7C%7C%7C&sdata=fLj68EHBS6NS%2 >> F6gIiMAGYtzq8xH%2FyLZlb3zfTHZnay4%3D&reserved=0), and with your >> final approval we can then move this document forward for >> publication. >> >> Thank you! >> >> RFC Editor/lb >> >>> On Jan 22, 2025, at 9:17 AM, Lynne Bartholomew >> <lbartholo...@staff.rfc-editor.org> wrote: >>> >>> Hi, Med. >>> >>> We have further updated this document per your notes below. >>> >>> The latest files are posted here. 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d.boucadair%40orange.com%7C48507eee672b4a17ef7f08dd3ef3471f%7C90c >> 7a20a >>> >> f34b40bfbc48b9253b6f5d20%7C0%7C0%7C638735937045243390%7CUnknown%7 >> CTWFp >>> >> bGZsb3d8eyJFbXB0eU1hcGkiOnRydWUsIlYiOiIwLjAuMDAwMCIsIlAiOiJXaW4zM >> iIsIk >>> >> FOIjoiTWFpbCIsIldUIjoyfQ%3D%3D%7C0%7C%7C%7C&sdata=Ys5kKOsf2DPw%2F >> T89YV >>> H1JgQMvSGAObpBqSM2dQP5cBg%3D&reserved=0 >>> >>> Thank you! >>> >>> RFC Editor/lb >>> >>>> On Jan 21, 2025, at 10:23 PM, mohamed.boucad...@orange.com >> wrote: >>>> >>>> Hi Lynne, >>>> >>>> Thank you for this update. >>>> >>>> Please see inline. >>>> >>>> Cheers, >>>> Med >>>> >>>>> -----Message d'origine----- >>>>> De : Lynne Bartholomew <lbartholo...@staff.rfc-editor.org> >>>>> Envoyé : mardi 21 janvier 2025 20:51 À : tirumal reddy >>>>> <kond...@gmail.com>; BOUCADAIR Mohamed INNOV/NET >>>>> <mohamed.boucad...@orange.com> Cc : Ben Schwartz >> <bem...@meta.com>; >>>>> Éric Vyncke <evyn...@cisco.com>; Dan Wing >> <danw...@gmail.com>; >>>>> kevin.sm...@vodafone.com; Ben Schwartz >>>>> <bemasc=40meta....@dmarc.ietf.org>; rfc-editor@rfc- >> editor.org; Ben >>>>> Schwartz <i...@bemasc.net>; add-...@ietf.org; add- >> cha...@ietf.org; >>>>> auth48archive@rfc-editor.org Objet : Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be >> 9704 >>>>> <draft-ietf-add-split-horizon- >>>>> authority-14> for your review >>>>> >>>> >>>>> >>>>> Hi, Tiru and Med. >>>>> >>>>> Tiru, we have noted your approval on the AUTH48 status page: >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> >> https://eur03.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2 >>>>> Fwww.rfc- >>>>> >> editor.org%2Fauth48%2Frfc9704&data=05%7C02%7Cmohamed.boucadair%40 >>>>> >> orange.com%7Cc13836ea188b41ef816508dd3a5531a3%7C90c7a20af34b40bfb >>>>> >> c48b9253b6f5d20%7C0%7C0%7C638730859758428970%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZs >>>>> >> b3d8eyJFbXB0eU1hcGkiOnRydWUsIlYiOiIwLjAuMDAwMCIsIlAiOiJXaW4zMiIsI >>>>> >> kFOIjoiTWFpbCIsIldUIjoyfQ%3D%3D%7C0%7C%7C%7C&sdata=p17ZoIPFSmcZpB >>>>> UZnS0pf1ldYK5UiGU%2F0kWl9w7DeIo%3D&reserved=0 >>>>> >>>>> Med, we have updated this document per your note below. >> However, >>>>> we're not sure if the updates are correct. >>>>> >>>>> We followed the style of several recent RFCs, where the note >> is >>>>> placed in the sourcecode in the XML file where applicable. >> In >>>>> addition to the record entry at the end of Section 5.1, we >> applied >>>>> this style to Figures 1, 3, and 4 accordingly. >>>> >>>> [Med] I'm afraid that the note use is not correct for figures >> 3/4: the unfolding wouldn't apply per Section 7.2.2 of 8792 >> "backslash ('\') character immediately followed by the end-of- >> line character sequence"). >>>> >>>> I suggest you delete the note for these two figures. >>>> >>>>> >>>>> Also, FYI that we now receive the following warning from >> xml2rfc: >>>>> >>>>> Warning: Unused reference: There seems to be no reference to >>>>> [RFC8792] in the document >>>>> >>>>> Please let us know if you would prefer that the note only >> appear in >>>>> Section 5.1. >>>> >>>> [Med] I suggest that it only appears in 5.1 + Figure 1. >> Thanks. >>>> >>>>> >>>>> The latest files are posted here. Please refresh your >> browser: >>>>> >>>>> >>>> .. >>>>> >>>>> Thank you! >>>>> >>>>> RFC Editor/lb >>>>> >>>>> >>>>>> On Jan 17, 2025, at 3:10 AM, mohamed.boucad...@orange.com >>>>> wrote: >>>>>> >>>>>> Hi Lynne, all, >>>>>> >>>>>> One comment about: >>>>>> >>>>>> CURRENT: >>>>>> Long lines in examples are wrapped using a single backslash >>>>> ("\") per >>>>>> [RFC8792]. >>>>>> >>>>>> I would reinsert back this text that was deleted: >>>>>> >>>>>> "NOTE: '\' line wrapping per [RFC8792]" >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> The reasoning is this MUST from 8792: >>>>>> >>>>>> == >>>>>> Text content that has been folded as specified by this >>>>> strategy MUST >>>>>> adhere to the following structure. >>>>>> >>>>>> 7.1.1. Header >>>>>> >>>>>> The header is two lines long. >>>>>> >>>>>> The first line is the following 36-character string; this >>>>> string MAY >>>>>> be surrounded by any number of printable characters. This >>>>> first line >>>>>> cannot itself be folded. >>>>>> >>>>>> NOTE: '\' line wrapping per RFC 8792 >>>>>> >>>>>> The second line is an empty line, containing only the end- >> of- >>>>> line >>>>>> character sequence. This line provides visual separation >> for >>>>>> readability. >>>>>> ... >>>>>> == >>>>>> >>>>>> Thank you. >>>>>> >>>>>> Cheers, >>>>>> Med (Doc Shepherd) >>>>> >>>>>> On Jan 17, 2025, at 2:49 AM, tirumal reddy >> <kond...@gmail.com> >>>>> wrote: >>>>>> >>>>>> Thank you for the changes. The update looks good to me and I >>>>> approve the publication. >>>>>> >>>>>> Cheers, >>>>>> -Tiru >>>>>> >>>>>> On Thu, 16 Jan 2025 at 22:29, Lynne Bartholomew >>>>> <lbartholo...@staff.rfc-editor.org> wrote: >>>>>> Hi, Tiru, Ben, and Éric. >>>>>> >>>>>> Tiru and Ben, we have further updated this document per your >>>>> notes below. 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I think >> we >>>>> intended the following text: >>>>>>> >>>>>>> OLD: "A compliant client MAY perform ..." >>>>>>> NEW: "The client MAY perform ..." >>>>>>> >>>>>>> --Ben >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>>> On Jan 15, 2025, at 10:25 PM, Eric Vyncke (evyncke) >>>>> <evyn...@cisco.com> wrote: >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Hello Lynne, >>>>>>> I only find a change in a MAY in section 6.1 s/ >>>>> Alternatively, a client might perform DNSSEC validation/A >> compliant >>>>> client MAY perform DNSSEC validation/. Is it this one you are >> asking >>>>> about ? It this is the case, then it is approved. >>>>>>> Regards >>>>>>> -éric >>>>>> >>>>>>> On Jan 15, 2025, at 9:57 PM, tirumal reddy >>>>> <kond...@gmail.com> wrote: >>>>>>> >>>>>>> On Wed, 15 Jan 2025 at 22:18, Lynne Bartholomew >>>>> <lbartholo...@staff.rfc-editor.org> wrote: >>>>>>>> Hi, Tiru, Ben, and Éric* >>>>>>>> >>>>>>>> * Éric, please let us know if you approve the change from >>>>> "could" to "MAY". (We have to get AD approval for any >> changes >>>>> related to key words from RFC 2119.) >>>>>>>> >>>>>>>> Tiru and Ben, we have updated this document per your notes >>>>> below. Quick follow-up question: >>>>>>>> >>>>>>>> Because "PvD" stands for "Provisioning Domain", "using DNR >>>>> and PvD" reads as "using DNR and Provisioning Domain", which >> reads a >>>>> bit oddly. Should "and PvD" be "and PvDs" or "and a PvD"? >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Please proceed with "a PvD". >>>>>>> >>>>>>>> The latest files are posted here. 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A simpler and clearer (but more >>>>> invasive) change would be: >>>>>>>> >>>>>>>> NEW: >>>>>>>> The client MAY perform ... >>>>>>>> >>>>>>>> Sounds good to me. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>>> On Jan 15, 2025, at 7:12 AM, Ben Schwartz >> <bem...@meta.com> >>>>> wrote: >>>>>>>> >>>>>>>>> The term "compliant" here seems to imply that the client >>>>> is adhering to a particular specification but it doesn't add >>>>> meaningful information in this context. >>>>>>>> >>>>>>>> Without "compliant", I think this sentence is potentially >>>>> ambiguous as to whether we are describing an acceptable >> behavior or >>>>> an unacceptable behavior. A simpler and clearer (but more >>>>> invasive) change would be: >>>>>>>> >>>>>>>> NEW: >>>>>>>> The client MAY perform ... >>>>>>>> >>>>>>>> --Ben >>>>>>> >>>>>>>> On Jan 15, 2025, at 1:58 AM, tirumal reddy >>>>> <kond...@gmail.com> wrote: >>>>>>>> >>>>>>>> All of the changes look good except for the the following >> 2 >>>>> issues: >>>>>>>> >>>>>>>> 1. >>>>>>>> >>>>>>>> To ensure that this assumption holds, clients MUST NOT >>>>> relax the >>>>>>>> acceptance rules they would otherwise apply when using >>>>> this resolver. >>>>>>>> For example, if the client would check the Authenticated >>>>> Data (AD) >>>>>>>> bit or validate RRSIGs locally when using this resolver, >>>>> it must also >>>>>>>> do so when resolving TXT records for this purpose. A >>>>> compliant >>>>>>>> client could perform DNSSEC validation for the >>>>> verification query >>>>>>>> even if it has disabled DNSSEC validation for other DNS >>>>> queries. >>>>>>>> >>>>>>>> Comment> >>>>>>>> >>>>>>>> The term "compliant" here seems to imply that the client >> is >>>>> adhering to a particular specification but it doesn't add >> meaningful >>>>> information in this context. We are not explicitly talking >> about >>>>> compliance with the DNSSEC standard, but rather the behavior >> of the >>>>> client in a specific situation. We are proposing that clients >> who >>>>> have disabled DNSSEC validation for some reason (e.g, >> performance) >>>>> could enable DNSSEC but only for the verification query. >>>>>>>> >>>>>>>> 2. >>>>>>>> >>>>>>>> OLD: >>>>>>>> *Steps 1-2*: The client determines the network's DNS >>>>> server >>>>>>>> (dns.example.net) and PvD ID (pvd.example.com) using >>>>> DNR and one >>>>>>>> of the following: DNR Router Solicitation, DHCPv4, or >>>>> DHCPv6. >>>>>>>> NEW: >>>>>>>> *Steps 1-2*: The client determines the network's DNS >>>>> server >>>>>>>> (dns.example.net) and PvD ID (pvd.example.com) using >>>>> DNR and PvD, along with one of >>>>>>>> the following: DNR Router Solicitation, DHCPv4, or >>>>> DHCPv6. >>>>>>>> >>>>>>>> Cheers, >>>>>>>> -Tiru >>>>>>>> >>>>>>>> On Tue, 14 Jan 2025 at 22:00, Lynne Bartholomew >>>>> <lbartholo...@staff.rfc-editor.org> wrote: >>>>>>>> Hi, Dan and Kevin. >>>>>>>> >>>>>>>> Dan, we have updated your contact information per your >> note >>>>> below. >>>>>>>> >>>>>>>> We have noted both of your approvals on the AUTH48 status >>>>> page: >>>>>>>> >>>>>>>> >>>>> >> https://eur03.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2 >>>>> Fwww.rfc- >>>>> >> editor.org%2Fauth48%2Frfc9704&data=05%7C02%7Cmohamed.boucadair%40 >>>>> >> orange.com%7Cc13836ea188b41ef816508dd3a5531a3%7C90c7a20af34b40bfb >>>>> >> c48b9253b6f5d20%7C0%7C0%7C638730859758716760%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZs >>>>> >> b3d8eyJFbXB0eU1hcGkiOnRydWUsIlYiOiIwLjAuMDAwMCIsIlAiOiJXaW4zMiIsI >>>>> >> kFOIjoiTWFpbCIsIldUIjoyfQ%3D%3D%7C0%7C%7C%7C&sdata=NI9nE4xyFfzzHI >>>>> keLbGa1PNP7lHDYVAQjDvllcUdkjs%3D&reserved=0 >>>>>>>> >>>>>>>> The latest files are posted here. 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States of America >>>>>>>>> Email: danw...@gmail.com >>>>>>>>> >>>>>>>>> >>>>>>>>> >>>>>>>>> The existing title page abbreviation for my employer is >>>>> fine as-is ("Citrix"). >>>>>>>>> >>>>>>>>> With that, please mark me as Approved. >>>>>>>>> >>>>>>>>> Thanks! >>>>>>>>> -d >>>>>>>>> >>>>>>>>> >>>>>>>>>> On Jan 13, 2025, at 10:23 AM, Lynne Bartholomew >>>>> <lbartholo...@staff.rfc-editor.org> wrote: >>>>>>>>>> >>>>>>>>>> Hi, Ben and Éric. >>>>>>>>>> >>>>>>>>>> Ben, we have further updated this document per your note >>>>> below. >>>>>>>>>> >>>>>>>>>> Éric, we have noted your approval for the updates to >>>>> Section 7 on the AUTH48 status page: >>>>>>>>>> >>>>>>>>>> >>>>> >> https://eur03.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2 >>>>> Fwww.rfc- >>>>> >> editor.org%2Fauth48%2Frfc9704&data=05%7C02%7Cmohamed.boucadair%40 >>>>> >> orange.com%7Cc13836ea188b41ef816508dd3a5531a3%7C90c7a20af34b40bfb >>>>> >> c48b9253b6f5d20%7C0%7C0%7C638730859758818865%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZs >>>>> 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ldUIjoyfQ%3D%3D%7C0%7C%7C%7C&sdata=wy3XaB9JGKSXkxpP%2BGoMXe14CoCd >>>>> lHAR42MliDt8o5M%3D&reserved=0 >>>>>>>>>> >>>>>>>>>> Thank you! >>>>>>>>>> >>>>>>>>>> RFC Editor/lb >>>>>>>>>> >>>>>>>>>> >>>>>>>>>>> On Jan 10, 2025, at 8:24 AM, Eric Vyncke (evyncke) >>>>> <evyn...@cisco.com> wrote: >>>>>>>>>>> >>>>>>>>>>> Hello Lynne, >>>>>>>>>>> The changes in section 7 are indeed borderline between >>>>> technical and editorial, but they respect my view of the >> IETF/ADD WG >>>>> consensus. I.e., I approve these changes. >>>>>>>>>>> Regards >>>>>>>>>>> -éric >>>>>>>>>> >>>>>>>>>>> On Jan 10, 2025, at 7:31 AM, Ben Schwartz >>>>> <bem...@meta.com> wrote: >>>>>>>>>>> >>>>>>>>>>>>> Section 2: >>>>>>>>>>>>> >>>>>>>>>>>>> OLD: >>>>>>>>>>>>> Validated Split Horizon: Indicates that a split- >>>>> horizon >>>>>>>>>>>>> configuration for some name is considered >>>>> "validated" if the >>>>>>>>>>>>> client has confirmed that a parent of that name >>>>> has authorized >>>>>>>>>>>>> this resolver to serve its own responses for that >>>>> name. >>>>>>>>>>>>> >>>>>>>>>>>>> NEW: >>>>>>>>>>>>> Validated Split Horizon: A split-horizon >>>>>>>>>>>>> configuration for some name is considered >>>>> "validated" if the >>>>>>>>>>>>> client has confirmed that a parent of that name >>>>> has authorized >>>>>>>>>>>>> this resolver to serve its own responses for that >>>>> name. >>>>>>>>>>> >>>>>>>>>>>> [rfced] We added the word "that" in order to keep the >>>>> sentence-fragment style used in all four list items. Please >> let us >>>>> know > if you would prefer your complete-sentence style for >> all four >>>>> items. >>>>>>>>>>> >>>>>>>>>>> Sentence-fragment style is fine, but I find the >>>>> adjusted text hard to parse. Let's try this change: >>>>>>>>>>> >>>>>>>>>>> OLD: >>>>>>>>>>> A split-horizon configuration that for some name is >>>>> considered "validated" if the client has confirmed that a >> parent of >>>>> that name has authorized this resolver to serve its own >> responses >>>>> for that name. >>>>>>>>>>> >>>>>>>>>>> NEW: >>>>>>>>>>> A split-horizon configuration that is authorized by the >>>>> parents of the affected names and confirmed by the client. >>>>>>>>>>> >>>>>>>>>>> --Ben >>>>>>>>>> >>>>>>>>>> >>>>>>>>> >>>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>> >>>> >>>> >> _________________________________________________________________ >> ____ >>>> _______________________________________ >>>> Ce message et ses pieces jointes peuvent contenir des >> informations >>>> confidentielles ou privilegiees et ne doivent donc pas etre >> diffuses, >>>> exploites ou copies sans autorisation. Si vous avez recu ce >> message >>>> par erreur, veuillez le signaler a l'expediteur et le detruire >> ainsi que les pieces jointes. 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