Hi, Med. We have further updated this document per your notes below.
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RFC Editor/lb > On Jan 21, 2025, at 10:23 PM, mohamed.boucad...@orange.com wrote: > > Hi Lynne, > > Thank you for this update. > > Please see inline. > > Cheers, > Med > >> -----Message d'origine----- >> De : Lynne Bartholomew <lbartholo...@staff.rfc-editor.org> >> Envoyé : mardi 21 janvier 2025 20:51 >> À : tirumal reddy <kond...@gmail.com>; BOUCADAIR Mohamed >> INNOV/NET <mohamed.boucad...@orange.com> >> Cc : Ben Schwartz <bem...@meta.com>; Éric Vyncke >> <evyn...@cisco.com>; Dan Wing <danw...@gmail.com>; >> kevin.sm...@vodafone.com; Ben Schwartz >> <bemasc=40meta....@dmarc.ietf.org>; rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org; >> Ben Schwartz <i...@bemasc.net>; add-...@ietf.org; add- >> cha...@ietf.org; auth48archive@rfc-editor.org >> Objet : Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9704 <draft-ietf-add-split-horizon- >> authority-14> for your review >> > >> >> Hi, Tiru and Med. >> >> Tiru, we have noted your approval on the AUTH48 status page: >> >> >> https://eur03.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2 >> Fwww.rfc- >> editor.org%2Fauth48%2Frfc9704&data=05%7C02%7Cmohamed.boucadair%40 >> orange.com%7Cc13836ea188b41ef816508dd3a5531a3%7C90c7a20af34b40bfb >> c48b9253b6f5d20%7C0%7C0%7C638730859758428970%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZs >> b3d8eyJFbXB0eU1hcGkiOnRydWUsIlYiOiIwLjAuMDAwMCIsIlAiOiJXaW4zMiIsI >> kFOIjoiTWFpbCIsIldUIjoyfQ%3D%3D%7C0%7C%7C%7C&sdata=p17ZoIPFSmcZpB >> UZnS0pf1ldYK5UiGU%2F0kWl9w7DeIo%3D&reserved=0 >> >> Med, we have updated this document per your note below. However, >> we're not sure if the updates are correct. >> >> We followed the style of several recent RFCs, where the note is >> placed in the sourcecode in the XML file where applicable. In >> addition to the record entry at the end of Section 5.1, we >> applied this style to Figures 1, 3, and 4 accordingly. > > [Med] I'm afraid that the note use is not correct for figures 3/4: the > unfolding wouldn't apply per Section 7.2.2 of 8792 "backslash ('\') > character immediately followed by the end-of-line character sequence"). > > I suggest you delete the note for these two figures. > >> >> Also, FYI that we now receive the following warning from xml2rfc: >> >> Warning: Unused reference: There seems to be no reference to >> [RFC8792] in the document >> >> Please let us know if you would prefer that the note only appear >> in Section 5.1. > > [Med] I suggest that it only appears in 5.1 + Figure 1. Thanks. > >> >> The latest files are posted here. Please refresh your browser: >> >> > .. >> >> Thank you! >> >> RFC Editor/lb >> >> >>> On Jan 17, 2025, at 3:10 AM, mohamed.boucad...@orange.com >> wrote: >>> >>> Hi Lynne, all, >>> >>> One comment about: >>> >>> CURRENT: >>> Long lines in examples are wrapped using a single backslash >> ("\") per >>> [RFC8792]. >>> >>> I would reinsert back this text that was deleted: >>> >>> "NOTE: '\' line wrapping per [RFC8792]" >>> >>> >>> The reasoning is this MUST from 8792: >>> >>> == >>> Text content that has been folded as specified by this >> strategy MUST >>> adhere to the following structure. >>> >>> 7.1.1. Header >>> >>> The header is two lines long. >>> >>> The first line is the following 36-character string; this >> string MAY >>> be surrounded by any number of printable characters. This >> first line >>> cannot itself be folded. >>> >>> NOTE: '\' line wrapping per RFC 8792 >>> >>> The second line is an empty line, containing only the end-of- >> line >>> character sequence. This line provides visual separation for >>> readability. >>> ... >>> == >>> >>> Thank you. >>> >>> Cheers, >>> Med (Doc Shepherd) >> >>> On Jan 17, 2025, at 2:49 AM, tirumal reddy <kond...@gmail.com> >> wrote: >>> >>> Thank you for the changes. The update looks good to me and I >> approve the publication. >>> >>> Cheers, >>> -Tiru >>> >>> On Thu, 16 Jan 2025 at 22:29, Lynne Bartholomew >> <lbartholo...@staff.rfc-editor.org> wrote: >>> Hi, Tiru, Ben, and Éric. >>> >>> Tiru and Ben, we have further updated this document per your >> notes below. Ben, no miscommunication; apologies for missing the >> change from "A compliant" to "The" earlier. >>> >>> Éric, yes, we were asking about the last sentence in Section >> 6.1. Apologies for not being clearer. 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I think we >> intended the following text: >>>> >>>> OLD: "A compliant client MAY perform ..." >>>> NEW: "The client MAY perform ..." >>>> >>>> --Ben >>> >>> >>>> On Jan 15, 2025, at 10:25 PM, Eric Vyncke (evyncke) >> <evyn...@cisco.com> wrote: >>>> >>>> Hello Lynne, >>>> I only find a change in a MAY in section 6.1 s/ >> Alternatively, a client might perform DNSSEC validation/A >> compliant client MAY perform DNSSEC validation/. Is it this one >> you are asking about ? It this is the case, then it is approved. >>>> Regards >>>> -éric >>> >>>> On Jan 15, 2025, at 9:57 PM, tirumal reddy >> <kond...@gmail.com> wrote: >>>> >>>> On Wed, 15 Jan 2025 at 22:18, Lynne Bartholomew >> <lbartholo...@staff.rfc-editor.org> wrote: >>>>> Hi, Tiru, Ben, and Éric* >>>>> >>>>> * Éric, please let us know if you approve the change from >> "could" to "MAY". 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>>>>> >>>>> Without "compliant", I think this sentence is potentially >> ambiguous as to whether we are describing an acceptable behavior >> or an unacceptable behavior. A simpler and clearer (but more >> invasive) change would be: >>>>> >>>>> NEW: >>>>> The client MAY perform ... >>>>> >>>>> Sounds good to me. >>>> >>>> >>>>> On Jan 15, 2025, at 7:12 AM, Ben Schwartz <bem...@meta.com> >> wrote: >>>>> >>>>>> The term "compliant" here seems to imply that the client >> is adhering to a particular specification but it doesn't add >> meaningful information in this context. >>>>> >>>>> Without "compliant", I think this sentence is potentially >> ambiguous as to whether we are describing an acceptable behavior >> or an unacceptable behavior. A simpler and clearer (but more >> invasive) change would be: >>>>> >>>>> NEW: >>>>> The client MAY perform ... >>>>> >>>>> --Ben >>>> >>>>> On Jan 15, 2025, at 1:58 AM, tirumal reddy >> <kond...@gmail.com> wrote: >>>>> >>>>> All of the changes look good except for the the following 2 >> issues: >>>>> >>>>> 1. >>>>> >>>>> To ensure that this assumption holds, clients MUST NOT >> relax the >>>>> acceptance rules they would otherwise apply when using >> this resolver. >>>>> For example, if the client would check the Authenticated >> Data (AD) >>>>> bit or validate RRSIGs locally when using this resolver, >> it must also >>>>> do so when resolving TXT records for this purpose. A >> compliant >>>>> client could perform DNSSEC validation for the >> verification query >>>>> even if it has disabled DNSSEC validation for other DNS >> queries. >>>>> >>>>> Comment> >>>>> >>>>> The term "compliant" here seems to imply that the client is >> adhering to a particular specification but it doesn't add >> meaningful information in this context. We are not explicitly >> talking about compliance with the DNSSEC standard, but rather the >> behavior of the client in a specific situation. We are proposing >> that clients who have disabled DNSSEC validation for some reason >> (e.g, performance) could enable DNSSEC but only for the >> verification query. >>>>> >>>>> 2. >>>>> >>>>> OLD: >>>>> *Steps 1-2*: The client determines the network's DNS >> server >>>>> (dns.example.net) and PvD ID (pvd.example.com) using >> DNR and one >>>>> of the following: DNR Router Solicitation, DHCPv4, or >> DHCPv6. >>>>> NEW: >>>>> *Steps 1-2*: The client determines the network's DNS >> server >>>>> (dns.example.net) and PvD ID (pvd.example.com) using >> DNR and PvD, along with one of >>>>> the following: DNR Router Solicitation, DHCPv4, or >> DHCPv6. >>>>> >>>>> Cheers, >>>>> -Tiru >>>>> >>>>> On Tue, 14 Jan 2025 at 22:00, Lynne Bartholomew >> <lbartholo...@staff.rfc-editor.org> wrote: >>>>> Hi, Dan and Kevin. >>>>> >>>>> Dan, we have updated your contact information per your note >> below. >>>>> >>>>> We have noted both of your approvals on the AUTH48 status >> page: >>>>> >>>>> >> https://eur03.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2 >> Fwww.rfc- >> editor.org%2Fauth48%2Frfc9704&data=05%7C02%7Cmohamed.boucadair%40 >> orange.com%7Cc13836ea188b41ef816508dd3a5531a3%7C90c7a20af34b40bfb >> c48b9253b6f5d20%7C0%7C0%7C638730859758716760%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZs >> b3d8eyJFbXB0eU1hcGkiOnRydWUsIlYiOiIwLjAuMDAwMCIsIlAiOiJXaW4zMiIsI >> kFOIjoiTWFpbCIsIldUIjoyfQ%3D%3D%7C0%7C%7C%7C&sdata=NI9nE4xyFfzzHI >> keLbGa1PNP7lHDYVAQjDvllcUdkjs%3D&reserved=0 >>>>> >>>>> The latest files are posted here. 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minor change -- please remove the street address for >> my contact information, as we just closed that building in Santa >> Clara, so: >>>>>> >>>>>> OLD: >>>>>> Dan Wing >>>>>> Citrix Systems, Inc. >>>>>> 4988 Great America Pkwy >>>>>> Santa Clara, CA 95054 >>>>>> United States of America >>>>>> Email: danw...@gmail.com >>>>>> >>>>>> NEW: >>>>>> Dan Wing >>>>>> Citrix Systems, Inc. >>>>>> United States of America >>>>>> Email: danw...@gmail.com >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> The existing title page abbreviation for my employer is >> fine as-is ("Citrix"). >>>>>> >>>>>> With that, please mark me as Approved. >>>>>> >>>>>> Thanks! >>>>>> -d >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>>> On Jan 13, 2025, at 10:23 AM, Lynne Bartholomew >> <lbartholo...@staff.rfc-editor.org> wrote: >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Hi, Ben and Éric. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Ben, we have further updated this document per your note >> below. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Éric, we have noted your approval for the updates to >> Section 7 on the AUTH48 status page: >>>>>>> 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technical and editorial, but they respect my view of the IETF/ADD >> WG consensus. I.e., I approve these changes. >>>>>>>> Regards >>>>>>>> -éric >>>>>>> >>>>>>>> On Jan 10, 2025, at 7:31 AM, Ben Schwartz >> <bem...@meta.com> wrote: >>>>>>>> >>>>>>>>>> Section 2: >>>>>>>>>> >>>>>>>>>> OLD: >>>>>>>>>> Validated Split Horizon: Indicates that a split- >> horizon >>>>>>>>>> configuration for some name is considered >> "validated" if the >>>>>>>>>> client has confirmed that a parent of that name >> has authorized >>>>>>>>>> this resolver to serve its own responses for that >> name. >>>>>>>>>> >>>>>>>>>> NEW: >>>>>>>>>> Validated Split Horizon: A split-horizon >>>>>>>>>> configuration for some name is considered >> "validated" if the >>>>>>>>>> client has confirmed that a parent of that name >> has authorized >>>>>>>>>> this resolver to serve its own responses for that >> name. >>>>>>>> >>>>>>>>> [rfced] We added the word "that" in order to keep the >> sentence-fragment style used in all four list items. Please let >> us know > if you would prefer your complete-sentence style for >> all four items. >>>>>>>> >>>>>>>> Sentence-fragment style is fine, but I find the >> adjusted text hard to parse. Let's try this change: >>>>>>>> >>>>>>>> OLD: >>>>>>>> A split-horizon configuration that for some name is >> considered "validated" if the client has confirmed that a parent >> of that name has authorized this resolver to serve its own >> responses for that name. >>>>>>>> >>>>>>>> NEW: >>>>>>>> A split-horizon configuration that is authorized by the >> parents of the affected names and confirmed by the client. >>>>>>>> >>>>>>>> --Ben >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>> >>>> >>> > > ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________ > Ce message et ses pieces jointes peuvent contenir des informations > confidentielles ou privilegiees et ne doivent donc > pas etre diffuses, exploites ou copies sans autorisation. 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