Thanks, Jim. Please see my comments inline.
The updates are done on GitHub for your review. Tobias > On 6. Apr 2021, at 18:58, Gould, James <jgo...@verisign.com> wrote: > > Tobias, > > In reviewing the version of the draft in GitHub, I have the following > feedback: > > Nit – There is an extra line in the second paragraph of section 4.1.3.1 “Info > Maintenance Item” that looks like it needs to be removed. > a. When an <info> command has been processed successfully, the EPP > b. > c. <resData> TS: Thanks! Fixed. > Nit – It may be useful to adjust the dates in the draft to be in the future. > For example: > Section 4.1.3.1 Info Maintenance Info example > i. > 2020-12-30T06:00:00Z to 2021-12-30T06:00:00Z > ii. > 2020-12-30T14:25:57Z to 2021-12-30T14:25:57Z > iii. > 2020-10-08T22:10:00Z to 2021-10-08T22:10:00Z > Section 4.1.3.2 Info Maintenance List example > i. > 2020-12-30T06:00:00Z to 2021-12-30T06:00:00Z > ii. > 2020-12-30T07:00:00Z to 2021-12-30T07:00:00Z > iii. > 2020-09-08T22:10:00Z to 2021-09-08T22:10:00Z > iv. > 2021-02-15T04:30:00Z to 2022-02-15T04:30:00Z > v. > 2021-02-15T05:30:00Z to 2022-02-15T05:30:00Z > vi. > 2020-09-08T22:11:00Z to 2021-09-08T22:11:00Z > vii. > 2020-10-17T15:00:00Z to 2021-10-17T15:00:00Z > Section 4.1.4 “EPP <poll> Command” example > i. > 2020-12-30T06:00:00Z to 2021-12-30T06:00:00Z > ii. > 2020-12-30T14:25:57Z to 2021-12-30T14:25:57Z > iii. > 2020-10-08T22:10:00Z to 2021-10-08T22:10:00Z TS: I’ve added another year to each timestamp. > Once the draft passes WGLC, my recommendation is to change the XML namespace > from urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:epp:maintenance-0.3 to > urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:epp:maintenance-1.0 > TS: Will keep that in mind and do the update after WGLC. > Thanks, > > -- > > JG > > <image001.png> > > James Gould > Fellow Engineer > jgo...@verisign.com > <applewebdata://13890C55-AAE8-4BF3-A6CE-B4BA42740803/jgo...@verisign.com> > > 703-948-3271 > 12061 Bluemont Way > Reston, VA 20190 > > Verisign.com <http://verisigninc.com/> > > From: Tobias Sattler <satt...@united-domains.de > <mailto:satt...@united-domains.de>> > Date: Tuesday, April 6, 2021 at 12:29 PM > To: James Gould <jgo...@verisign.com <mailto:jgo...@verisign.com>>, > "michael.baul...@knipp.de <mailto:michael.baul...@knipp.de>" > <michael.baul...@knipp.de <mailto:michael.baul...@knipp.de>> > Cc: "regext@ietf.org <mailto:regext@ietf.org>" <regext@ietf.org > <mailto:regext@ietf.org>> > Subject: [EXTERNAL] Re: [regext] I-D Action: > draft-ietf-regext-epp-registry-maintenance-12.txt > > Thanks Michael and Jim. > > I’ve made the adjustment on GitHub for your review. > https://github.com/seitsu/registry-epp-maintenance/blob/master/draft-ietf-regext-epp-registry-maintenance.txt > > <https://secure-web.cisco.com/1qHhn9m_n0q1Aop-LvX59fsy8JV04r9d-NS_iCDZ5x8vZ_ZXeJt2CO7oDXK27hsU8Mr8S_41nsjRPFrjYDAiFveBRZ3ZkF5Nw_uo2v2SnNYXN7rkMl6JYfcd0O3CGnC0_kwrvWmTkqx6cPzh6l4_7icShqr4GYvhj7rqXvmaccBz2M5PDzZm--ziQiAUKihBIGtyIJkMdPi33ApZBYhIAqUSMx1C5YFQyxN622sUqjir77szIdHyTOIdQrMiPLsb6/https%3A%2F%2Fgithub.com%2Fseitsu%2Fregistry-epp-maintenance%2Fblob%2Fmaster%2Fdraft-ietf-regext-epp-registry-maintenance.txt> > > Tobias > > >> On 6. Apr 2021, at 14:21, Gould, James <jgould=40verisign....@dmarc.ietf.org >> <mailto:jgould=40verisign....@dmarc.ietf.org>> wrote: >> >> If the intent is to support a list of description elements, then my >> recommendation is to update the schema, as previously noted with >> maxOccurs="unbounded", and update the description of the element with >> something similar to: >> >> Zero or more OPTIONAL free-form descriptions of the maintenance... >> >> -- >> >> JG >> >> >> >> James Gould >> Fellow Engineer >> jgo...@verisign.com <mailto:jgo...@verisign.com> >> <applewebdata://13890C55-AAE8-4BF3-A6CE-B4BA42740803/jgo...@verisign.com >> <applewebdata://13890C55-AAE8-4BF3-A6CE-B4BA42740803/jgo...@verisign.com>> >> >> 703-948-3271 >> 12061 Bluemont Way >> Reston, VA 20190 >> >> Verisign.com <http://verisign.com/> <http://verisigninc.com/ >> <http://secure-web.cisco.com/1q-u3_Fr2541unEM2O8NdJxYqFh-WP_FpSuHAnIlW4rGpTehTzsSVd_qpsRWqNaHhOnOwxg6faxqvKocTCBIu91LoZVv_J_kw1nC2UsaEML6NrC3QKXRfXGhRa2bpkKVVR6rxisAdEeCN5_wuXAs58cVUua-wGK4zjIMlgZpfeSCqA4JTmRfBdUhBQcg1jYXcsyK5sZXzT7K2BFB0_DUbc1h4YT-Vd5yi8GGR6IdM3hqyirKu_MwDUGUBUVo6E2R_/http%3A%2F%2Fverisigninc.com%2F>> >> >> On 4/6/21, 5:50 AM, "regext on behalf of Michael Bauland" >> <regext-boun...@ietf.org <mailto:regext-boun...@ietf.org> on behalf >> ofmichael.baul...@knipp.de <mailto:michael.baul...@knipp.de>> wrote: >> >> >> Hi Jody, >> >> thanks for your answer. >> >> I agree with your comments, but there is still an issue with the >> descriptions in multiple languages. You said: >> >> >>> << JWK >>> The maint:description element is unbounded. If descriptions in different >>> languages are needed, they can be sent on the same poll message. >>> >>>>> >> >> I think this is not the case according to the schema: >> >> <complexType name="maintDataType"> >> <sequence> >> <element name="id" type="maint:idType"/> >> <element name="type" type="maint:typeType" minOccurs="0"/> >> <element name="pollType" type="maint:pollType" minOccurs="0"/> >> <element name="systems" type="maint:systemsType"/> >> <element name="environment" type="maint:envType"/> >> <element name="start" type="dateTime"/> >> <element name="end" type="dateTime"/> >> <element name="reason" type="maint:reasonEnum"/> >> <element name="detail" type="anyURI" minOccurs="0"/> >> <element name="description" type="maint:descriptionType" >> minOccurs="0"/> >> <element name="tlds" type="maint:tldsType" minOccurs="0"/> >> <element name="intervention" type="maint:interventionType" >> minOccurs="0"/> >> <element name="crDate" type="dateTime"/> >> <element name="upDate" type="dateTime" minOccurs="0"/> >> </sequence> >> </complexType> >> >> There is no maxOccurs element and the default is maxOccurs="1". >> My suggestion is to update the schema and allow unbounded occurrences to >> support multiple languages in one notification. >> >> Best regards, >> >> Michael >> >> -- >> ____________________________________________________________________ >> | | >> | knipp | Knipp Medien und Kommunikation GmbH >> ------- Technologiepark >> Martin-Schmeisser-Weg 9 >> 44227 Dortmund >> Germany >> >> Dipl.-Informatiker Fon: +49 231 9703-0 >> Fax: +49 231 9703-200 >> Dr. Michael Bauland SIP: michael.baul...@knipp.de >> <mailto:michael.baul...@knipp.de> >> Software Development E-mail: michael.baul...@knipp.de >> <mailto:michael.baul...@knipp.de> >> >> Register Court: >> Amtsgericht Dortmund, HRB 13728 >> >> Chief Executive Officers: >> Dietmar Knipp, Elmar Knipp >> >> _______________________________________________ >> regext mailing list >> regext@ietf.org <mailto:regext@ietf.org> >> >> https://secure-web.cisco.com/15k4MSsRmzO-vHkCwzCFTssa7wd6ube1TSVU9nPxSO0AvM5DSo-tqeF_QM-BOhHtQTCvYiN1Vu5caHJVGataZX93gVy4Td_WfFf5P69l-KZVWCTZeL63FrxS3j4izOnCXW-UkcYj9gZZxKHR8n7ECnYRg01JPweXW12kVqhxtE6z8By7KHJXHqSb4Grl_-1b_WDL_WAddOkE8Unkkb_601jo0hsbojViwdeVAB0mLY90OJBdLKj7DeW6hTQwwrxZQ/https%3A%2F%2Fwww.ietf.org%2Fmailman%2Flistinfo%2Fregext >> >> <https://secure-web.cisco.com/15k4MSsRmzO-vHkCwzCFTssa7wd6ube1TSVU9nPxSO0AvM5DSo-tqeF_QM-BOhHtQTCvYiN1Vu5caHJVGataZX93gVy4Td_WfFf5P69l-KZVWCTZeL63FrxS3j4izOnCXW-UkcYj9gZZxKHR8n7ECnYRg01JPweXW12kVqhxtE6z8By7KHJXHqSb4Grl_-1b_WDL_WAddOkE8Unkkb_601jo0hsbojViwdeVAB0mLY90OJBdLKj7DeW6hTQwwrxZQ/https%3A%2F%2Fwww.ietf.org%2Fmailman%2Flistinfo%2Fregext> >> >> >> _______________________________________________ >> regext mailing list >> regext@ietf.org <mailto:regext@ietf.org> >> https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/regext >> <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/regext>
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