Tobias, It looks good with one nit of making descriptions plural as in “Zero or more OPTIONAL free-form descriptions”.
-- JG [cid:image001.png@01D72AE0.FB456930] James Gould Fellow Engineer jgo...@verisign.com<applewebdata://13890C55-AAE8-4BF3-A6CE-B4BA42740803/jgo...@verisign.com> 703-948-3271 12061 Bluemont Way Reston, VA 20190 Verisign.com<http://verisigninc.com/> From: Tobias Sattler <satt...@united-domains.de> Date: Tuesday, April 6, 2021 at 12:29 PM To: James Gould <jgo...@verisign.com>, "michael.baul...@knipp.de" <michael.baul...@knipp.de> Cc: "regext@ietf.org" <regext@ietf.org> Subject: [EXTERNAL] Re: [regext] I-D Action: draft-ietf-regext-epp-registry-maintenance-12.txt Thanks Michael and Jim. I’ve made the adjustment on GitHub for your review. https://github.com/seitsu/registry-epp-maintenance/blob/master/draft-ietf-regext-epp-registry-maintenance.txt<https://secure-web.cisco.com/1qHhn9m_n0q1Aop-LvX59fsy8JV04r9d-NS_iCDZ5x8vZ_ZXeJt2CO7oDXK27hsU8Mr8S_41nsjRPFrjYDAiFveBRZ3ZkF5Nw_uo2v2SnNYXN7rkMl6JYfcd0O3CGnC0_kwrvWmTkqx6cPzh6l4_7icShqr4GYvhj7rqXvmaccBz2M5PDzZm--ziQiAUKihBIGtyIJkMdPi33ApZBYhIAqUSMx1C5YFQyxN622sUqjir77szIdHyTOIdQrMiPLsb6/https%3A%2F%2Fgithub.com%2Fseitsu%2Fregistry-epp-maintenance%2Fblob%2Fmaster%2Fdraft-ietf-regext-epp-registry-maintenance.txt> Tobias On 6. Apr 2021, at 14:21, Gould, James <jgould=40verisign....@dmarc.ietf.org<mailto:jgould=40verisign....@dmarc.ietf.org>> wrote: If the intent is to support a list of description elements, then my recommendation is to update the schema, as previously noted with maxOccurs="unbounded", and update the description of the element with something similar to: Zero or more OPTIONAL free-form descriptions of the maintenance... -- JG James Gould Fellow Engineer jgo...@verisign.com<mailto:jgo...@verisign.com> <applewebdata://13890C55-AAE8-4BF3-A6CE-B4BA42740803/jgo...@verisign.com> 703-948-3271 12061 Bluemont Way Reston, VA 20190 Verisign.com<http://Verisign.com> <http://verisigninc.com/<http://secure-web.cisco.com/1q-u3_Fr2541unEM2O8NdJxYqFh-WP_FpSuHAnIlW4rGpTehTzsSVd_qpsRWqNaHhOnOwxg6faxqvKocTCBIu91LoZVv_J_kw1nC2UsaEML6NrC3QKXRfXGhRa2bpkKVVR6rxisAdEeCN5_wuXAs58cVUua-wGK4zjIMlgZpfeSCqA4JTmRfBdUhBQcg1jYXcsyK5sZXzT7K2BFB0_DUbc1h4YT-Vd5yi8GGR6IdM3hqyirKu_MwDUGUBUVo6E2R_/http%3A%2F%2Fverisigninc.com%2F>> On 4/6/21, 5:50 AM, "regext on behalf of Michael Bauland" <regext-boun...@ietf.org<mailto:regext-boun...@ietf.org> on behalf of michael.baul...@knipp.de<mailto:michael.baul...@knipp.de>> wrote: Hi Jody, thanks for your answer. I agree with your comments, but there is still an issue with the descriptions in multiple languages. You said: << JWK The maint:description element is unbounded. If descriptions in different languages are needed, they can be sent on the same poll message. I think this is not the case according to the schema: <complexType name="maintDataType"> <sequence> <element name="id" type="maint:idType"/> <element name="type" type="maint:typeType" minOccurs="0"/> <element name="pollType" type="maint:pollType" minOccurs="0"/> <element name="systems" type="maint:systemsType"/> <element name="environment" type="maint:envType"/> <element name="start" type="dateTime"/> <element name="end" type="dateTime"/> <element name="reason" type="maint:reasonEnum"/> <element name="detail" type="anyURI" minOccurs="0"/> <element name="description" type="maint:descriptionType" minOccurs="0"/> <element name="tlds" type="maint:tldsType" minOccurs="0"/> <element name="intervention" type="maint:interventionType" minOccurs="0"/> <element name="crDate" type="dateTime"/> <element name="upDate" type="dateTime" minOccurs="0"/> </sequence> </complexType> There is no maxOccurs element and the default is maxOccurs="1". My suggestion is to update the schema and allow unbounded occurrences to support multiple languages in one notification. Best regards, Michael -- ____________________________________________________________________ | | | knipp | Knipp Medien und Kommunikation GmbH ------- Technologiepark Martin-Schmeisser-Weg 9 44227 Dortmund Germany Dipl.-Informatiker Fon: +49 231 9703-0 Fax: +49 231 9703-200 Dr. Michael Bauland SIP: michael.baul...@knipp.de<mailto:michael.baul...@knipp.de> Software Development E-mail: michael.baul...@knipp.de<mailto:michael.baul...@knipp.de> Register Court: Amtsgericht Dortmund, HRB 13728 Chief Executive Officers: Dietmar Knipp, Elmar Knipp _______________________________________________ regext mailing list regext@ietf.org<mailto:regext@ietf.org> https://secure-web.cisco.com/15k4MSsRmzO-vHkCwzCFTssa7wd6ube1TSVU9nPxSO0AvM5DSo-tqeF_QM-BOhHtQTCvYiN1Vu5caHJVGataZX93gVy4Td_WfFf5P69l-KZVWCTZeL63FrxS3j4izOnCXW-UkcYj9gZZxKHR8n7ECnYRg01JPweXW12kVqhxtE6z8By7KHJXHqSb4Grl_-1b_WDL_WAddOkE8Unkkb_601jo0hsbojViwdeVAB0mLY90OJBdLKj7DeW6hTQwwrxZQ/https%3A%2F%2Fwww.ietf.org%2Fmailman%2Flistinfo%2Fregext _______________________________________________ regext mailing list regext@ietf.org<mailto:regext@ietf.org> https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/regext
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