Hi,
I have reviewed the document and support it as it is. Nevertheless, I
have the following very minor comments/questions.
1 Introduction:
> This mapping provides a
> mechanism by which EPP servers may notify and EPP clients to query
> upcoming maintenances.
While I'm not a native speaker, to me it sounds as if the grammar is not
correct in the second part of the sentence. Maybe the "EPP clients to"
should be replace by "EPP clients can"?
3.3. Maintenance Elements:
The <maint:id> content must not be changed. What about the optional
"name" attribute? There's no rule about it so implementations are free
to alter this if the ID remains the same. Is that correct/intended?
<maint:host>:
> The affected maintained system contains the hostname, which
> SHALL be an A-label according to [RFC5891].
This again sounds strange to my (non-native) ears. Shouldn't this
perhaps be something like:
"The affected maintained system's hostname, which SHALL be an A-label
according to [RFC5891]."
<maint:environment>:
There must be exactly one environment. If I want to inform about a
maintenance which affects, e.g., both OT&E and staging I have to send
two notifications (with two different server unique identifiers). I
guess that's a corner case that does not happen too often, so it should
be ok.
<maint:description>:
Would it maybe make sense to allow multiple occurrences with different
language attributes? If I want to add a German and English description.
I have seen such notifications from some registries (mainly cc) that
communicate in English and their native tongue.
Best regards,
Michael
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