Hi Aijun,

On Tue, Aug 27, 2024 at 1:18 PM Aijun Wang <wangai...@tsinghua.org.cn>
wrote:

> Hi, Dhruv:
>
>
>
> I support the forward this draft in fast track. Some comments are bellows
> for your reference:
>

Dhruv: Thanks for taking time to review.



>
>
> 1)     Should the two paragraphs within the “Abstract” be connected via
> some conjunction, for example, “On the other hand” etc. to make the
> conversion more smooth?
>

Dhruv: Since the two paragraphs are orthogonal, I dont think "on the other
hand" is suitable. I will leave it as it is and lets see if the RFC-editor
have suggestions if this needs to be changed.



> 2)     Should the table 2 in section 3, add one line to describe the
> Error-Type 0-251, and their corresponding Error-Value?, to cover all the
> possibility?
>
> The final format of table 2 should be looked like the followings:
>
>
>
> +============+==================+==================+============+
>
> |        Error-Type     |                 Meaning               |
>           Error-value               |           Reference    |
>
> +============+==================+==================+============+
>
> | 0-251                     |                  IETF Review         |
>              0-255                  |        RFC5440        |
>
> | 252-255                |           Experimental Use       |
>              0-255                  |          [this.I-D]       |
>
> |                              |
>                                           |          Experimental Use
>        |                               |
>
>
> +----------------+------------------------+------------------------+----------------+
>
>
>

Dhruv: That would be confusing as it would not align with the existing IANA
registry at
https://www.iana.org/assignments/pcep/pcep.xhtml#pcep-error-object

And note that the practice of maintaining two tables is a standard practice
as seen at https://www.iana.org/assignments/pcep/pcep.xhtml#pcep-messages

Thanks!
Dhruv



> Best Regards
>
>
>
> Aijun Wang
>
> China Telecom
>
>
>
> *发件人:* forwardingalgori...@ietf.org [mailto:forwardingalgori...@ietf.org] *代表
> *Dhruv Dhody
> *发送时间:* 2024年8月22日 11:42
> *收件人:* pce@ietf.org
> *抄送:* draft-dhody-pce-iana-upd...@ietf.org;
> draft-farrel-pce-experimental-err...@ietf.org
> *主题:* [Pce] Re: Adoption Poll of draft-dhody-pce-iana-update
>
>
>
> Hi WG,
>
>
>
> Please find a proposed update that merges
> draft-farrel-pce-experimental-errors -
> https://ietf-wg-pce.github.io/draft-ietf-pce-iana-update/draft-ietf-pce-iana-update.html
>
> Diff:
> https://author-tools.ietf.org/api/iddiff?doc_1=draft-ietf-pce-iana-update&url_2=https://ietf-wg-pce.github.io/draft-ietf-pce-iana-update/draft-ietf-pce-iana-update.txt
>
>
>
> Please let us know if you have an objection to this update. Authors will
> post the revision in the datatracker next week and will request Julien to
> move this I-D quickly.
>
> Feel free to also provide your comments and edits.
>
>
>
> Thanks!
>
> Dhruv & Adrian
>
>
>
> On Mon, Aug 19, 2024 at 2:59 PM <julien.meu...@orange.com> wrote:
>
> Hi all,
>
> We have clear support and no objection on adopting this small I-D: it is
> now a PCE WG item.
>
> @Authors: please re-submit the draft as draft-ietf-pce-iana-update-00.
>
> @Authors of draft-farrel-pce-experimental-errors: please talk to the
> authors of the aforementioned I-D to consider adding your proposal as a
> contribution into this new WG effort.
>
> Thank you,
>
> Julien
>
>
> Le 30/07/2024 à 10:36, julien.meu...@orange.com a écrit :
> > Hi all,
> >
> > In his review of the "native IP" draft, John suggested to consider
> > adjusting to "IETF Review" the allocation policy of some of the PCEP
> > registries currently using "Standards Action". Dhruv has submitted
> > draft-dhody-pce-iana-update to quickly resolve this concern and bring
> > higher consistency among PCEP registries.
> >
> > As a result, does the WG support the adoption of
> > draft-dhody-pce-iana-update [1] as a WG item? Please, share your
> > feedback using the PCE mailing list and include your rationale in case
> > you're opposed.
> >
> > Thanks,
> >
> > Julien
> >
> >
> > [1] https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-dhody-pce-iana-update/
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