----- Original Message -----
> From: "Stuart Henderson" <s...@spacehopper.org>
> To: "misc" <misc@openbsd.org>
> Sent: Saturday, September 12, 2015 11:58:29 AM
> Subject: Re: anoncvs.html.head

> On 2015-09-11, Rob Pierce <r...@2keys.ca> wrote:
>>    <li><b>src</b> - Houses all source code for the OpenBSD Operating System.
>>    <li><b>ports</b> - Houses the <a href="faq/ports/index.html">OpenBSD 
>> Ports</a>.
>> -  <li><b>www</b> - Houses all OpenBSD web pages. (Including this one).
>> +  <li><b>www</b> - Houses all OpenBSD web pages (including this one).
> 
> I like that
> 
>>    <li><b>xenocara</b> - Houses OpenBSD's active X.org v7 source tree.
>>    <li><b>X11</b> and <b>XF4</b> - Houses OpenBSD's adaptation of the
>>        <a href="http://www.XFree86.org/";>XFree86-3</a> and XFree86-4
>> @@ -122,7 +122,7 @@ with only one part of the tree.  The two
>>  which contains the files used to create the kernel, and <tt>src.tar.gz</tt>
>>  which contains all the other "userland" utilities.
>>  In general, however, you will usually want both of them installed.
>> -Assuming the downloaded files, <tt>src.tar.gz</tt>,
>> +Assuming the downloaded files <tt>src.tar.gz</tt>,
>> <tt>sys.tar.gz</tt> and <tt>xenocara.tar.gz</tt> are in <tt>/usr</tt>:
> 
> I think this was OK as it was
> 
>> <p>
>> -Not all people will wish to unpack all the file sets, but as the system
>> +Not all people will wish to unpack all the source file, but as the system
>>  must be kept in sync, you will generally need to set up all trees.
> 
> and this (and the new sentence doesn't quite make sense)
> 
>> <p>
>> -You can also just use cvs(1) to "<b>checkout</b>" the source repository
>> +You can also just use
>> +<a
>> href="http://www.openbsd.org/cgi-bin/man.cgi?query=cvs&amp;sektion=1&amp;format=html";>cvs(1)</a>
>> +to "<b>checkout</b>" the source repository
>>  for you. This is discussed in the <a href="#using">next section</a>.
> 
> OK I guess, though I don't think we need to hyperlink every instance of
> a program name
> 
>> @@ -160,16 +162,12 @@ from the <a href="errata.html">errata</a
>>  For more information on these "flavors" of OpenBSD, see
>> <a href="faq/faq5.html#Flavors">here</a>.
>>  
>> -<p>Once you have decided which tree to follow, you must choose which 
>> Anonymous
>> -CVS server you are going to use.  A list of these servers is
>> -<a href="#CVSROOT">below</a>.
>> -
>> <p>
>> -Once you have chosen which <a href="#CVSROOT">Anonymous CVS Server</a> you 
>> will
>> -use, you can start using cvs. For those of you
>> +Once you have decided which tree to follow, and which <a
>> href="#CVSROOT">Anonymous CVS Server</a> you will
> 
> Please try and keep <80 columns in the source file where sensible
> 
>> +use, you can start using <a
>> href="http://www.openbsd.org/cgi-bin/man.cgi?query=cvs&amp;sektion=1&amp;format=html";>cvs(1)</a>.
>> For those of you
>>  who have CDs you can start with the CVS checkout that is on the CD by using
>>  the method <a href="#starting">above</a> to get the sources onto your 
>> system.
>> -If you don't have a CD handy, use the method below to checkout the sources.
>> +If you don't have a CD handy, use the method below to checkout the sources:
>>  
>> <p>
>> <ul><li>First, start out by `get'-ing an initial tree:
>> @@ -210,9 +208,11 @@ Confirm this, and the fingerprint will t
>>      ...
>> </pre>
>>  
>> +<p>
>>  Note that the above format with SHA256 fingerprints was added after the
>>  release of OpenBSD 5.6; older versions only use MD5 fingerprints.
>>  
>> +<p>
>> <li> Anytime afterwards, to `update' this tree:
>> <p> (If you are following <i>current</i>):
>> <pre>
>> @@ -234,7 +234,7 @@ to merge changes in.
>> <li> NOTE:
>>  If you are updating a source tree that you initially fetched
>>  from a different server, or from a CD, you <strong>must</strong>
>> -add the <em>-d [cvsroot]</em> option to cvs.
>> +add the <em>-d [cvsroot]</em> option to cvs:
>> <pre>
>>      # <strong>cd /usr/src</strong>
>>      # <strong>cvs -d anon...@anoncvs.ca.openbsd.org:/cvs -q up -Pd</strong>
>> @@ -295,11 +295,11 @@ directory, and a subsequent update will
>>  
>> <p>
>>  The anoncvs service gives fledgling developers a chance to learn CVS
>> -operation and get thoroughly involved in the development process
>> +operations and get thoroughly involved in the development process
> 
> "operation" already seem ok
> 
>>  before getting "commit" access -- as a result of showing useful
>>  skills and high quality results they will naturally later be given
>>  developer access.
>> -As well, people providing patches can create their "diff"s relative
>> +As well, people providing patches can create their diffs relative
>>  to the CVS tree, which will ease integration.
>>  
> > <h3><a name="EXAMPLE"><font color="#0000e0">Example usages for cvs(1)</font>

Thanks Stuart. I am preparing a new diff which I will send shortly.

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