Hi Carl, many thanks for your work. Some remarks:
https://codereview.appspot.com/343060043/diff/40001/Documentation/learning/fundamental.itely File Documentation/learning/fundamental.itely (right): https://codereview.appspot.com/343060043/diff/40001/Documentation/learning/fundamental.itely#newcode465 Documentation/learning/fundamental.itely:465: optionally followed by one or more post-events. Post-events add I'd completely delete 'post-event'. From a musical thinking it makes no sense. An articulation is not performed _after_ the note. To explain it programmatical, this is not the right place, imho. Why not simply: "A note entry in LilyPond consists of a pitch, followed by a duration, optionally followed by things such as articulations, fingerings, string numbers, slurs, ties, explanatory text, etc." https://codereview.appspot.com/343060043/diff/40001/Documentation/learning/fundamental.itely#newcode481 Documentation/learning/fundamental.itely:481: Post-events follow the note to which they are attached. Suppose we Here as well. Also, I think it's important to drop a sentence about the "-"-signs, which actually attach those optional elements to the note. So my suggestion: "Optional elements are added at the end of the initial note-duration-entry. Probably using a "-"-sign, which can be omitted, if no ambiguity occurs. Suppose we ..." https://codereview.appspot.com/343060043/diff/40001/Documentation/learning/fundamental.itely#newcode488 Documentation/learning/fundamental.itely:488: {c'8-1--(~^\markup{"text annotation"} c' d')} For the sake of simplicity I'd not use direction-modifiers and enter the text without explicit \markup, i.e.: {c'8-1--(~-"text annotation" c' d')} https://codereview.appspot.com/343060043/ _______________________________________________ lilypond-devel mailing list lilypond-devel@gnu.org https://lists.gnu.org/mailman/listinfo/lilypond-devel
