Hi Carl

LGTM, with a couple of minor comments.

Trevor



https://codereview.appspot.com/343060043/diff/1/Documentation/learning/fundamental.itely
File Documentation/learning/fundamental.itely (right):

https://codereview.appspot.com/343060043/diff/1/Documentation/learning/fundamental.itely#newcode488
Documentation/learning/fundamental.itely:488: @end lilypond
I'd prefer \relative or nothing in this example. \absolute
has not been introduced earlier, in fact it's not used at
all in the LM.

https://codereview.appspot.com/343060043/diff/1/Documentation/learning/fundamental.itely#newcode492
Documentation/learning/fundamental.itely:492: @ruser{Expressive marks},
Might be good to point to the relevant sections in the LM
as well, in Section 2.1

https://codereview.appspot.com/343060043/

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