Hi Antony, > Hi Tero, > I support advancing this document. > > Valery, > I wonder Number or Numbers. May be double check? > I think following are the correct use, in singular.
My reasoning for using plural form is that we here are speaking about the properties of not a single sequence number (in some packet sent by some sender), but about the properties that sequence numbers from all packets of a given SA (as a whole) hold. Perhaps this is not a good argument from native speaker PoV, so I'm open for suggestions and corrections :-) > "Sequence Number Properties (SNP)" instead of "Sequence Numbers Properties > (SNP)" > > "Partially Transmitted 64-bit Sequential Number" instead of "Partially Transmitted > 64-bit Sequential Numbers" > > "No Extended Sequence Number" instead of "No Extended Sequence Numbers" to "No Extended Sequence Numbers" (as well as "Extended Sequence Numbers") is the existing name of transform ID in the RFC7296, so this case is correct. > RFC4303 use mostly singular for ESN, only in Appendix A it use plural. That's right, but only when it defines how a single sequence number is generated and verified, thus it is appropriate to use singular form. When RFC 4303 speaks about the properties of sequence number as a whole, (whether they are 32-bit SN or 64-bit ESN), it uses plural form. See Section 2.2.1, 3.4.2 as examples. Regards, Valery. > > -antony > > On Fri, Dec 06, 2024 at 02:17:30AM +0200, Tero Kivinen wrote: > > As we talked earlied when doing g-ikev2 IETF last call, the text > > talking about renaming ESN transform type got separated to this new > > draft, and this will start one (1) week working group last call of the > > draft. > > > > I try to make this fast so it can catch up the g-ikev2 draft (which is > > in IETF LC until 2024-12-10), so unless we get objections during WGLC, > > I will request publication of ths draft almst immediately after the > > WGLC ends. > > > > Send your comments about the draft to the ipsec list before > > 2024-12-13. > > -- > > kivi...@iki.fi > > > > _______________________________________________ > > IPsec mailing list -- ipsec@ietf.org > > To unsubscribe send an email to ipsec-le...@ietf.org _______________________________________________ IPsec mailing list -- ipsec@ietf.org To unsubscribe send an email to ipsec-le...@ietf.org
