On Wed, Jan 13, 2016 at 03:10:16PM +0100, Ludovic Courtès wrote:
> Leo Famulari <l...@famulari.name> skribis:
>
> > * gnu/packages/audio.scm (sonic): New variable.
>
> [...]
>
> > + #:phases (modify-phases %standard-phases
> > + (delete 'configure))))
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>
> There’s a problem here. :-)
The indentation of the second line, correct?
>
> > + (synopsis "Speed up or slow down speech")
> > + (description "Sonic is a simple algorithm for speeding up or slowing
> > down
>
> s/is a/implements a/
>
> > +speech. However, it's optimized for speed ups of over 2X, unlike previous
> > +algorithms for changing speech rate. The Sonic library is a very simple
> > ANSI C
> > +library that is designed to easily be integrated into streaming voice
> > +applications, like TTS back ends.
>
> I would change the last sentence to:
>
> Sonic is a C library designed to be easily integrated into streaming
> voice applications such as text-to-speech (TTS) back ends.
>
> > +The primary motivation behind Sonic is to enable the blind and visually
> > impaired
> > +to improve their productivity with open source speech engines, like espeak.
> ^‑------------------------------------------^
> Replace with “with speech engines such as eSpeak.”
>
> > +Sonic can also be used by the sighted. For example, Sonic can improve the
> > +experience of listening to an audio book on an Android phone.")
>
> I’d remove these two sentences.
>
> OK with these changes.
Done.
>
> Thanks,
> Ludo’.
