Leo Famulari <l...@famulari.name> skribis:
> * gnu/packages/audio.scm (sonic): New variable.
[...]
> + #:phases (modify-phases %standard-phases
> + (delete 'configure))))
There’s a problem here. :-)
> + (synopsis "Speed up or slow down speech")
> + (description "Sonic is a simple algorithm for speeding up or slowing down
s/is a/implements a/
> +speech. However, it's optimized for speed ups of over 2X, unlike previous
> +algorithms for changing speech rate. The Sonic library is a very simple
> ANSI C
> +library that is designed to easily be integrated into streaming voice
> +applications, like TTS back ends.
I would change the last sentence to:
Sonic is a C library designed to be easily integrated into streaming
voice applications such as text-to-speech (TTS) back ends.
> +The primary motivation behind Sonic is to enable the blind and visually
> impaired
> +to improve their productivity with open source speech engines, like espeak.
^‑------------------------------------------^
Replace with “with speech engines such as eSpeak.”
> +Sonic can also be used by the sighted. For example, Sonic can improve the
> +experience of listening to an audio book on an Android phone.")
I’d remove these two sentences.
OK with these changes.
Thanks,
Ludo’.
