Hi Marvin, On Wed, Dec 11, 2013 at 7:08 AM, Marvin Humphrey <mar...@rectangular.com> wrote: > ...I've taken a stab at a second draft: > > http://incubator.apache.org/guides/release.html >
Short and sweet, I like it! I've just added "as a plain text file" in the release manifest creation section. I suggest using simpler, more active phrases for a few things at https://paste.apache.org/fBoJ - feel free to apply or not, it's mostly a question of style. -Bertrand --------------------------------------------------------------------- To unsubscribe, e-mail: general-unsubscr...@incubator.apache.org For additional commands, e-mail: general-h...@incubator.apache.org
