yes. this is good. -G
On Fri, Dec 15, 2017 at 12:30 PM, <fujiw...@jprs.co.jp> wrote: > Thanks. > > Adding a example as a text is a little complicated. > > Adding examples as a table is good ? or too large ? > > Delegation | Parent | Name Server Name | Type > | Zone | | > ------------+--------+--------------------+------------------------------ > com | . | a.gtld-servers.net | in-bailiwick / sibling domain > net | . | a.gtld-servers.net | in-bailiwick / in-domain > example.org | org | ns.example.org | in-bailiwick / in-domain > example.org | org | ns.ietf.org | in-bailiwick / sibling domain > example.org | org | ns.example.com | out-of-bailiwick > example.jp | jp | ns.example.jp | in-bailiwick / in-domain > example.jp | jp | ns.example.ne.jp | in-bailiwick / sibling domain > example.jp | jp | ns.example.com | out-of-bailiwick > > -- > Kazunori Fujiwara, JPRS <fujiw...@jprs.co.jp> > >> From: George Michaelson <g...@algebras.org> >> feels like a concrete example in a.b.c.example.com terms would help >> define both in-baliwick, and out-of-baliwick, for the cases. >> >> On Wed, Dec 13, 2017 at 9:42 PM, <fujiw...@jprs.co.jp> wrote: >>> Thanks. >>> >>> terminology-bis-08: >>> | In-bailiwick: An adjective to describe a name server whose name is >>> | either subordinate to or (rarely) the same as the zone origin. >>> >>> Ok, In-bailwick in terminology-bis-08 may be restrictive because "the >>> zone origin" is unclear. I intended that "the zone origin" is the zone >>> origin of parent zone. The sentence needs more words. >>> >>> NEW >>> >>> In-bailiwick: An adjective to describe a name server whose name is >>> either subordinate to or (rarely) the same as the origin >>> of the zone that contains the delegation to the name server. >>> >>> ... bad english text ... please fix. >>> >>> -- >>> Kazunori Fujiwara, JPRS <fujiw...@jprs.co.jp> >>> >>>> From: Mark Andrews <ma...@isc.org> >>>> The text for "in-bailwick" is too restrictive, it doesn’t just cover NS >>>> records or >>>> glue records. >>>> >>>> In-bailwick refers to records that in the normal course of DNS resolution >>>> would have been requested of by the server the current response is from. >>>> e.g. if you are querying a .com server then all records in the response >>>> that end >>>> with .com are in-bailwick. >>>> >>>> Mark >>>> >>>>> On 5 Dec 2017, at 5:27 am, Paul Hoffman <paul.hoff...@vpnc.org> wrote: >>>>> >>>>> Greetings again. >>>>> >>>>> Some of the new terms added to the terminology-bis draft >>>>> (https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-dnsop-terminology-bis/)since >>>>> RFC 7719 can be a bit tricky. This week, we hope you will look at the >>>>> definitions in the draft for: >>>>> - In-bailiwick >>>>> - Out-of-bailiwick >>>>> - In-domain >>>>> - Sibling domain >>>>> Please review these terms and comment on the list if you think the >>>>> definitions should change. >>>>> >>>>> --Paul Hoffman >>>>> >>>>> [[ As a reminder, we asked the following last week, but got no reply: For >>>>> the past many versions of the terminology-bis draft >>>>> (https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-dnsop-terminology-bis/), >>>>> Section 2 has definitions of "Global DNS" and "Private DNS", based on the >>>>> facets listed in "Naming system". This was discussed heavily on the list >>>>> earlier, but it is also a pretty big change, so we want to be sure that >>>>> it is what the WG wants. Please review these terms and comment on the >>>>> list if you think the definitions should change. ]] >>>>> >>>>> _______________________________________________ >>>>> DNSOP mailing list >>>>> DNSOP@ietf.org >>>>> https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/dnsop >>>> >>>> -- >>>> Mark Andrews, ISC >>>> 1 Seymour St., Dundas Valley, NSW 2117, Australia >>>> PHONE: +61 2 9871 4742 INTERNET: ma...@isc.org >>>> >>>> _______________________________________________ >>>> DNSOP mailing list >>>> DNSOP@ietf.org >>>> https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/dnsop >>>> >>> _______________________________________________ >>> DNSOP mailing list >>> DNSOP@ietf.org >>> https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/dnsop >> _______________________________________________ DNSOP mailing list DNSOP@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/dnsop
