Hi, On 13/06/14 at 12:56 +0200, Raphael Hertzog wrote: > <p>For organizations that cannot contribute their own workforce to the LTS > team, <a href="http://www.freexian.com";>Freexian</a> — a French company > owned by Debian Developer Raphaël Hertzog — offered to act as an intermediary > between organizations interested in funding LTS work, and individual Debian > contributors preparing LTS security updates. For more information, see > Freexian's presentation of its > <a href="http://www.freexian.com/services/debian-lts.html";>Debian LTS > offer</a>.</p>
On one hand, it's clearly in Debian's interest to gather as much support as possible around LTS, and what Freexian is organizing is a great way to make progress on this. On the other hand, I would prefer if this part of the announcement feels more 'informational' rather than like an advertisement. So, minor nitpicks: > For more information, see > Freexian's presentation of its > <a href="http://www.freexian.com/services/debian-lts.html";>Debian LTS > offer</a>.</p> => For more information, see Freexian's description of this <a href="http://www.freexian.com/services/debian-lts.html";>plan</a>. > <p>The Debian Project welcomes this initiative, and is generally supportive > of organizations exploring new ways to help sustain the LTS project and > Debian in general.</p> s/new ways/ways/ > <p>Shall Debian 6 LTS be a success, it would be reconducted and > generalized so that Debian 7 (<q>wheezy</q>) and Debian 8 (<q>jessie</q>) > would also benefit from Long Term Support.</p> "it" is not very clear in this paragraph. Lucas -- To UNSUBSCRIBE, email to debian-lts-requ...@lists.debian.org with a subject of "unsubscribe". Trouble? Contact listmas...@lists.debian.org Archive: https://lists.debian.org/20140613112238.ga25...@xanadu.blop.info
