On Fri, 2014-06-13 at 12:56 +0200, Raphael Hertzog wrote: > I have been working with the security team, the press team and the leader > on a proper announce of Debian LTS. We would like to use this opportunity > to thank the (early|prospective) organizations that plan to contribute to > Debian LTS. I have scanned my mail archives to identify them. > > Please review the attached draft, share your comments and let me know if I > missed your company.
I'm not part of any of said companies, but a few comments in the hope that they're helpful: > <p>The Debian project is pleased to announce that the “Long Term > Support (LTS)” infrastructure to provide security updates for Debian Should those be <q></q>? > and all the other who will join them in the coming months.</p> s/other/others/ > <p>Shall Debian 6 LTS be a success, it would be reconducted and s/Shall/Should/ "Reconducted" sounds odd to me in English; I'd tend to simply use "repeated" instead. Regards, Adam -- To UNSUBSCRIBE, email to debian-lts-requ...@lists.debian.org with a subject of "unsubscribe". Trouble? Contact listmas...@lists.debian.org Archive: https://lists.debian.org/1402658594.28245.18.ca...@jacala.jungle.funky-badger.org
