Neeraj:

Thank you for adding the BGP error handling to your text.

If I understand your addition in -23, this draft treats a malformed BGP 
Community as “attribute discard”.

Malformed Extended Community: If a PE detects a malformed EVPN Link
Bandwidth Extended Community, for example because the "Value-Units"
has a value other than 0x00 or 0x01, it MUST ignore the extended community
and handle the BGP route as it would if it was received without this extended 
community.¶<https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-bess-evpn-unequal-lb-23#section-4.1.1-1.3.1>

Does “ignore” mean you discarding the extended community attribute and not 
forwarding it to another peer?

Here’s the “attribute discard text from RFC7606”:

   For any malformed attribute that is handled by the "attribute
   discard" instead of the "treat-as-withdraw" approach, it is critical
   to consider the potential impact of doing so.  In particular, if the
   attribute in question has or may have an effect on route selection or
   installation, the presumption is that discarding it is unsafe unless
   careful analysis proves otherwise.  The analysis should take into
   account the tradeoff between preserving connectivity and potential
   side effects.


Cheerily, Sue

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Hi Susan,

Many thanks for the review and comments below. All of the comments below are 
incorporated into revision 23.

Thanks,
Neeraj


On Thu, Oct 17, 2024 at 8:48 AM Susan Hares 
<sha...@ndzh.com<mailto:sha...@ndzh.com>> wrote:
BESS WG, BESS chairs, and authors:

This is a requested review from IDR chairs for 
draft-ietf-bess-evpn-unequal-lb-22.txt

I’m not attaching a file because it is short.

Cheerily, Sue Hares

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Status: Ready with nits (small technical nits and editorial nits)
Summary: This is a very useful draft for EVPN.
The draft has solid technical content and flow.
A few minor edits will fill in the gaps.

Caveat: Keyur Patel said he reviewed this draft, but non-of the chairs (IDR and 
BESS) can find it.

I’m sure Keyur review was great.  I just can find it.

Editorial/technical issue:

Section 4.1 - you should clear state that value units outside of 0x00 or 0x01 
are invalid.
Also, you should clearly state only 0x00 and 0x01 are valid.

Section 4.1 - what happens if Extended Community is malformed?  See RFC7606.
Please provide details.  You are missing a clearly delineated section on BGP 
error handling.

Editorial only:

1) spelling check:

5.2 - recevied - paragraph 1, sentence 1
5.2 - badwidth - paragraph 5, stanrding Please note.
6.2 - (VLAN-a % 4) - last paragraph.

Section 10.0 - IANA considerastions needs to use a better formatting.


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