BESS WG, BESS chairs, and authors: This is a requested review from IDR chairs for draft-ietf-bess-evpn-unequal-lb-22.txt
I'm not attaching a file because it is short. Cheerily, Sue Hares -------------- Status: Ready with nits (small technical nits and editorial nits) Summary: This is a very useful draft for EVPN. The draft has solid technical content and flow. A few minor edits will fill in the gaps. Caveat: Keyur Patel said he reviewed this draft, but non-of the chairs (IDR and BESS) can find it. I'm sure Keyur review was great. I just can find it. Editorial/technical issue: Section 4.1 - you should clear state that value units outside of 0x00 or 0x01 are invalid. Also, you should clearly state only 0x00 and 0x01 are valid. Section 4.1 - what happens if Extended Community is malformed? See RFC7606. Please provide details. You are missing a clearly delineated section on BGP error handling. Editorial only: 1) spelling check: 5.2 - recevied - paragraph 1, sentence 1 5.2 - badwidth - paragraph 5, stanrding Please note. 6.2 - (VLAN-a % 4) - last paragraph. Section 10.0 - IANA considerastions needs to use a better formatting.
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